Comments | cheshire23: [LJ Idol 10: Week 12] Last Summer

cheshire23

[LJ Idol 10: Week 12] Last Summer

Mar 19, 2017 10:22

Melissa's gotten used to the ocean. That might be the best way to say it. The shore of Lake Michigan just isn't the same ( Read more... )

lj idol 10, lissie loves katie

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eternal_ot March 20 2017, 12:34:01 UTC

Ah! There was a nice turn of events in there. This can turn into a bigger world for sure. A nice read.

beeker121 March 21 2017, 01:32:36 UTC

The longing and care that runs through this is lovely.

shadowwolf13 March 21 2017, 03:23:05 UTC

Beautiful and sweet.

dmousey March 21 2017, 13:17:42 UTC

This is a great take on the prompt! I wish humans could accept the fact that love is love.

I want to hug Melissa but I'll hug you instead- ::Hugs:: and peace~~~

roina_arwen March 21 2017, 19:00:22 UTC

I love the way you brought this back around to the saltwater, and to Melissa's progression.