Everwood // Free Falling (Hannah/Bright, R)

[cherryroad]

Free Falling.
Everwood.
Bright/Hannah, R, 800 words, written for the porn battle - prompt 'let go'.
Notes: This is more schmoopy than smutty, because it seemed more fitting for Hannah. I mean, this girl keeps a journal of her life.

Comments

[fly_meaway]

Wow. This is quite beautiful, I have to say. The way you paint these characters is so lovely and you're right; this does seem so fitting for Hannah and I think you got her so right. Really the entire softness in this is amazing, it sucked me right into it to be honest and just, very gorgeous. And the last line is amazing.

[cherryroad]

Thank you! Hannah has that sort of librarian appeal, like -- I'm sure lots of people think of her as that innocent girl who, when she's in the mood, takes off her glasses and goes wild? But I think there's a long way after canon for her to become that kind of person.

[heartcollides]

this is really beautiful! i think your point of view is really good. i think you got hannah perfectly right and the story is really subtle and wonderful! :D

[cherryroad]

Aw, thanks! :D