Comments | cherryroad: Twilight RPF // But She's Just Like a Maze (Kristen Stewart/Nikki Reed)

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Twilight RPF // But She's Just Like a Maze (Kristen Stewart/Nikki Reed)

Jan 01, 2009 20:14

But She's Just Like a Maze.
Twilight RPF.
Kristen Stewart/Nikki Reed, PG-13, 3611 words. Part of yuletide's 2008 challenge, written for Kit, originally posted here.
Notes: Thank you to marginaliana for the last-minute beta! As a disclaimer, this was inspired by Virginia Woolf's 'Mrs Dalloway' and the beginning and ending lines borrowed from that book and ( Read more... )

rpf: twilight: kristen/nikki, rpf: twilight, rating: teen, type: femslash, length: 2.5k-4k, challenge: yuletide, rpf

Comments 14

mangobaby January 6 2009, 19:10:13 UTC

Okay...so I think you are amazing. This was. So fucking good. I think you absolutely nailed Kristen...she was just, spot on. I loved it.

Okay, so she was licking the fork. It had cherry sauce in it and it was really sweet and she hadn't had breakfast. And Nikki had licked it first, and Kristen was all of fourteen years old, so sue her.

I liked the whole thing, but I loved that little bit. *shrugs* Do you have more? Because...yes. I love.

mangobaby January 6 2009, 19:13:29 UTC

Oh, and for the record? As much as I ship kristen/rob, I find kristen/nikki almost ridiculously amazing. At least, if there's more written like yours. :)

cherryroad January 7 2009, 18:14:12 UTC

Thank you so much for this comment, it really made me smile. :D This was a challenge for me because I wasn't very familiar with either Kristen or Nikki, so I made up most of it -- and had a lot of fun at it. I do want to write more in this "universe", though I'm not sure if or when I'll come up with ideas -- creativity is an extremely random thing in my case. Anyway, I'm happy you liked this, and thanks again for reading and commenting. :D

miniluv86 January 6 2009, 20:47:41 UTC

This totally rocked, srsly.

cherryroad January 7 2009, 18:14:45 UTC

Thank you!

onlyjustwhisper January 6 2009, 22:46:20 UTC

This is really really really brilliant. So very Nikki and so very Kristen, and totally how I picture them to be.
Amazing. I hope you write more :)

cherryroad January 7 2009, 18:16:36 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) I based the whole thing on extremely minimal knowledge of the girls, so it's a relief to hear the characterisation turned out somewhat realistic.

thehelene January 7 2009, 01:33:14 UTC

i don't even know. this is utterly amazing! your kristen is so real, it feels like i'm inside her head heh everything, every little detail, all gorgeous! love it to no end <3

cherryroad January 7 2009, 18:17:13 UTC

Thank you so much. :D

chasingtehcars January 10 2009, 13:52:50 UTC

i kinda love you.
this is awesome.
loved it. a lot.

+ mems.