A Collection of Thoughts from a Beta-Reader

Dec 22, 2008 04:08

After debating with myself for a while and really thinking about it I decided that it was time to give this a try. What follows after the cut are my thoughts on chibi_ruki’s fic Worthless WarChibi and I have joked around about how we should post my emails for people to read because according to Chibi my thoughts on the fic usually hit home and I have a way ( Read more... )

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o_cherushii_o December 22 2008, 03:06:40 UTC
wowww! i love that series- and these reviews look good - imma print em out and tell ya what i think later, k?? 8DD

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cherryrazor December 22 2008, 12:26:34 UTC
Well they're really just my little thoughts on what I think was happening in the chapter.
Thank you! ^^

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miseinen1 December 22 2008, 06:22:45 UTC
wow, I love the way you put all that into words. after reaing this i had to go back and read all chap. of worthless war again and got to look at it in a new way. Thank you for that.

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cherryrazor December 22 2008, 12:28:12 UTC
I'm glad that I could help out. That's why I posted this.. to give insight to people on the fic itself.
Thank you!

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govi_chan December 22 2008, 18:55:42 UTC
about whole review.. i feel you put down a big part of my own toughs on this story of chibi.... you wrote really GREAT review! ^^ i like the way you put your toughs on paper (to computer) and made it all clear and understandable. Thanks much for your insights. ♥

and about chapter 6 and thing you wrote I was half expecting Akira to lean in and close the distance between their lips. I was like this too :D

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cherryrazor December 24 2008, 11:14:39 UTC
I felt like it was time to actually post something instead of just joking around about it. And I'm glad that I could explain things so that people can actually say that "that's what I was thinking".
Thank you so much for actually taking the time to read this and to find the time to comment on it ^^

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cherryrazor February 15 2009, 13:26:01 UTC
Wow!
I didn't think that people were actually still reading through this, so I'm really taken with the fact that you took the time to read through it and to actually leave a comment ^^

I'm glad that you found what I wrote helpful and that it gave you new insight into the way that you see the characters and the fic. That's what its purpose was.

Thank you so much! ^^

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