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cherrymelle

Captains (Part 18)

Jan 11, 2007 19:56

TITLE: CAPTAINS
FANDOM: Gundam Wing
PAIRING: 1x2 and some het pairings in the background
RATING: R/NC-17
GENRE: AU, Adventure, Historical, Romance
WARNING: yaoi, cross-dressing, swearing, graphic violence, sex
DISCLAIMER: Don’t own anything save for the story, so please don’t sue poor little me ( Read more... )

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Comments 19

velvet_burns January 12 2007, 15:31:31 UTC

*screams* omfg you have just made my entire WEEK by posting this XD You have NO idea how happy I am *floats* I loved the little hand-squeeze between Meiran and Wufei, that was so cute... and then his farewell to Sally *snorfle* Poor Meiran XD And OMG PINK SHIP LOL *dead*

h0mg this is such a crappy review I'm so sorry, I suck x.x But I AM SO HAPPY like you have NO IDEA XD

cherrymelle January 15 2007, 16:52:55 UTC

I'm not sure I'm quite deserving of such enthusiasm with the way I've been procrastinating lately, but I'm ecstatic all the same. In the beginning I was planning to write more about the love triangle Meiran/Wufei/Sally but sadly it kinda fell on the side with all that is already going on. So most of it will be seen like this by little apartés almost behind the scenes. I hope it will be satisfying enough. As for the pink ship, I'm sorry. It just cracked me up. I always thought the Epyon was such a tacky mobile suit and really even in the series it is kind of pink.

And that wasn't a crappy review at all: it made me all giddy.

velvet_burns January 15 2007, 16:55:16 UTC

You know I had never thought of 'tacky' as a word to describe Epyon before but now that you mention it, it really is XD *snorfles* As for the Meiran/Wufei/Sally triangle - I really like the hints, you know? It gives depth to the story and their personalities without you having to spell everything out, and it works well.

shevaleon January 12 2007, 17:54:31 UTC

ROFL!!! A PINK SHIP!!!!!!!!! *giggles* Wonder, if Millie had to think HARD before making it this colour! But I thought he a bit more taste. ^O^
And you know, I have this silly notion that Hee-chan and Tro-cakes remind me of Don Quixote and Sancho respectively. Like his faithful servant will come to the rescue of his stoic master. *grins*
I'm soooo happy you didn't forget about this story!!! Please update soon!!
Huggles

cherrymelle January 15 2007, 16:59:47 UTC

I wonder myself about Zechsy's taste... Those kind of things tend to run in a family so maybe some of Relena's abysmal taste was passed on to him. Case in proof: the mask was kinda stupid and as for what he wears when he departs for the colonies in the role of the Prince of Sank born anew... *shudders*

I hadn't made the comparison myself with Don Quixote but I can see it. Heh? what do you say I could certainly have done far worse for myself. Thank you for pointing that out.

I promise I have no intention to let that story go unfinished and the next chapter is almost done.

sakuragoboom January 12 2007, 21:42:55 UTC

YOU'RE ALIVE!!!! OMG! So can't wait till Heero wakes up. Lol, a pink ship? *snerks* Must be Relena's doing. 'Anyway, anger was almost always productive where he was concerned' lmao, that made me laugh. In in doubt, get pissed. XDDD Can't wait till the next chapter!

cherrymelle January 15 2007, 17:06:02 UTC

Yeah, surprisingly I survived the end of year's celebrations. Things have been kinda hectic since thanksgiving with the visit of the inlaws, the feasts and such and I used all of that to convince myself I genuinely didn't have time to write. But I'm back and kicking!

I'm pretty sure you'll be surprised by the way I dealt with Heero's awakening. It should be funny at least. I couldn't resist to the pink ship, glad you liked it.

"When in doubt, get pissed?" There's a nice ring to it. Maybe I should use it as Duo's new motto. The "he runs, hides but never lies" has been overused. ^^

m_buggie January 13 2007, 05:37:36 UTC

Oh, how I've missed this fic series. You just made my night. Thank you so much for posting this. I'll even forgive you the fact that my face hurts from laughing.

cherrymelle January 15 2007, 17:09:08 UTC

I am very sorry for my long absence. I'll try to not disappear for quite so long from now on. I'm very happy you liked it and that there's still someone who appreciates my peculiar brand of humour. One day maybe I won't be quite so mean with my characters but it's nice for now to know someone likes sarcasm too.

miss_m_pathic January 15 2007, 06:12:48 UTC

Man this is so hilarious. Yes, that ship does sound tacky.

Is Heero going to stalk Duo again when he wakes up? Gotta love a stalkerish Heero, especially when it comes to Duo. I do, I do!

I hope to see the next chapter sometime soon! It's excellent!

P.S *snicker* Farts higher than his asshole.

velvet_burns January 15 2007, 16:56:22 UTC

P.S *snicker* Farts higher than his asshole.

Glad I wasn't alone in laughing at that one *snorfle*

cherrymelle January 15 2007, 17:22:50 UTC

Truly, that's a genuine French expression translated literally. I wasn't sure there was the equivalent in English so I'm glad that managed to get the point across anyway. I don't know how one would pass on the same meaning with an English expression; I couldn't find one. As I said, for those interested, the French translation is now up on my FF.net profile.... well the first few chapters anyway.

cherrymelle January 15 2007, 17:19:59 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. It is most satisfying to inspire laughter... well it is when in writing anyway.

Heero won't stop his obsessive behavior for quite some time yet, especially now that he has an idea of how Duo feels up close and personal.

I promise the next chapter won't be quite so long in coming, a few days at the most.

Hey it is a genuine French expression: "pêter plus haut que son cul." French is such a pretty language. ^^