II-The Dolls

Oct 01, 2008 13:48

II- The Dolls.

It's going to rain. Aiba thought glumly to himself as his glass eyes looked on at the shadows cast by the massive storm clouds gathering overhead. The lemon-yellow brightness of the sun that blanketed the little park in its warmth had been replaced a cold, oppressive gray. Little tornadoes played with dried, dead leaves, and the few ( Read more... )

ohno, nino, the dolls, g, au

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kirei_kisetsu October 5 2008, 08:28:11 UTC
This is getting so good! The plot really intrigues me, and I really like your writing style too - it's descriptive, yet not overly so and you keep it at a good pace! Can't wait for the next chappie~ :3

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cherry_armrest October 6 2008, 11:29:59 UTC
Wow! Thanks! I'll try not to disappoint :)

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thatamacedo October 5 2008, 08:54:44 UTC
It's so awesome this chapter, I really don't know what to say about it... ^^

I'll look forward the next chapters, and Sho's arrival!!

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i_am_zan October 5 2008, 17:12:43 UTC
I am sorry but your icon is deliciously distracting ... damn that shirt needs to come off!!!

do you know where those images are from?

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thatamacedo October 5 2008, 20:25:39 UTC
These pics are from the Popolo (november/08) magazine, I got them @ arashi_yuuki community.

An then, violentxxxpose made the drooling gifs!

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yay_box October 5 2008, 09:26:30 UTC
Definitely interesting. I like Yuki <3 Too bad she doesn't seem to be able to help the guys.
Looking forward to more =)

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zazasukie October 5 2008, 12:37:52 UTC
Yay!! A new chapter! ^__^
The story seems really interesting... Why can't they move? Why are they mannequins? What happened?? Umm... Really interesting!
Waiting impatiently for the next update!

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maiaide October 5 2008, 13:24:26 UTC
Hmmmm is this a flashback/before the first chapter? I guess so since Nino hasn't started working yet at the shop. How do they know him?! Oh! I can't wait.

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