There's No Place Like Home 2/2

[cherith0angel]

Part 1 Here

Comments

[doitlikethis123]

wow~ this is really good! i mean the au and then jongin's clinginess to soo~ so so sweet~ thanks for writing!

[cherith0angel]

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the story ^^

[rikli]

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i love this
i started reading when you posted the first taoris story and then i forgot you wanted to write more so it's such a wonderful surprise *_*
i really liked this au at first and now, after reading more, i LOVE it *_*

kai. is. so. cute.

[cherith0angel]

Thank you! I plan on doing a lot more with this AU really soon ^^

[purplepedro]

okay.. okay this is perfect beyond all reason i am so in love with this and with kaisoo's dynamic. the half-aquatic thing is a bonus and i'm imaginging jongin's top-half in his 'mer' state and i find it rather beautiful in my mind/ man this is sensational ;;

[cherith0angel]

If I was a better artist I would love to draw how I imagine Kai, because he really is beautiful in my head ;; Thank you for reading!

[zeroseven_]

i didn't think i would like this but i did! intergalactic things just throw me off; i don't know why but just sci-fi in general throws me off and even though i've been proven wrong a few times before, i just never learn to adapt and always veer away from things like that. i don't know what made me start this & at first i was still iffy but now i'm interested and like, it's so interesting (wow lack of vocabulary i are good job) & i think it's amazing how you threw little details in there that were vague but still made something in me go, "oh i wonder why she included that hmmmmmmm" i always love well thought out plots where what may read like just offhand comments and minute observations, turns into something down the road where you're like, "omg so that's why he said this! & that's why he did that thing to him!"

[cherith0angel]

I'm so grateful that you decided to read the story! I wasn't a big fan of sci-fi things in general until I started reading fanfic, even now some stories are to much for me. I tried to make this AU as friendly as I could to those like me who aren't necessarily big fans of sci-fi. Thank you so much for reading, I hope you enjoy my future stories ^^

[tackwoon]

I really really reaaaally enjoyed reading this one! Okay so maybe it was my bias to everything Kyungsoo kicking in but :") This was amazing! Kai being skittish at first and splashing water at Suho and Chanyeol was plain gold, I can't even. Also!!!!!! Kyungsoo!!!!!!! Crawling!!!!!! Too cute for life.

I completely understand how Suho feels when they hugged and he felt like he was intruding. I felt the same way when I read the part where they trace over each other's features and I just \(\\\▽\\\)\ Although!!! I've got to say that the part where Kai lifted Kyungsoo into the water was my favorite part uwu Soo is just so smol it hurts me. Kai snuggling into Kyungsoo while rocking back and forth in the water. Now that. That hurt me too.

I also really love your writing in general! It's so easy to read and digest and there are so many lines that got me smiling stupidly at my phone. In the middle of the night.

Kai, Chanyeol and Kyungsoo all leave, Kai saying the whole way that he’s not going to pass out. An hour later when they return,

[cherith0angel]

You are so cute!!! Also I'm a butt and I didn't post everything I worte for this AU on LJ, the vast majority is on AFF. Not sure if I linked to my profile in any of the other entries so here is my AFF blog post with a link to all the stories in order, in case you haven't seen them all.