Communication, Kinney Style

[chering]

TITLE: Communication, Kinney-Style

Background: I (fansee) wrote this as my 2013 qaf_giftxchnge gift to delvalmom, but I was never completely satisfied with the version I posted. (Is any writer ever completely satisfied? Probably not.) Anyway, this version has been revised, rewritten in part, and renamed. I hope you like the result

Comments

[pclu2004]

I liked this version even more. The first one seemed a little---rushed.
And this is longer, so it's even better.

Communication, Kinney-Style

[fansee]

Good.

I took so long to repost it because I knew it needed serious tweaking, but it took a while for the exact tweaks to percolate through my thick head.

Really appreciate the comment. Thanks, FanSee

[oasis6028]

That was beautifully done. I loved it.

Communication, Kinney Style

[fansee]

I'm so glad...and so happy you said so! FanSee

[later2nite]

I love this! It's very realistic - the perfect way for Brian and Justin to get back together.

Thank god Justin realized Brian was saying the words the only way he knew how.

Communication, Kinney Style

[fansee]

Thank god Justin realized Brian was saying the words the only way he knew how.

Considering he makes a good living persuading people to buy stuff, Brian can be amazingly inarticulate! FanSee

Re: Communication, Kinney Style

[later2nite]

I've often thought the same thing.

This icon you've used is perfect - Brian's body language is just screaming with trapped emotions.

Re: Communication, Kinney Style

[fansee]

pfodge is the artist who made the icon several years ago. I agree that it works with this story perfectly. FanSee

[6frog]

I always love your fics.
Have a really good 2014 love.
Love from 6frog

Communication, Kinney Style

[fansee]

I always love your fics.

And I love your comments.

Have a really good 2014 love.

Back atcha!

Love from 6frog

♥ FanSee

[sarahj2222]

Lovely, my dear. Thank you.. Hugs. Selma

[fansee]

Lovely, my dear. Thank you..

Thank YOU. ♥ ♥ ♥ FanSee