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alissablue February 24 2011, 05:49:02 UTC
"I have feelings for a man. -The sky pulsed. Clouds cleared.- I have feelings for Luke."
Well, eureka, what a glorious epiphany.

Luke’s brain was the most beautiful thing Reid had ever seen.
If there was ever a beautiful line to start a chapter with...

From now on his happy place would be slightly more specific.
Oh, Reid. I don't even know, words kind of fail me on this one. Brilliant, perhaps? Brilliant sounds about right.

At the very least Reid could stop being so dickish. Pack up the flamethrower. Stop pushing him away, hurting him out of habit. Out of fear. Reid could try to look for things they had in common, over which they could…relate, or bond, or whatever the humans were calling it these days. Reid would even do his best to repress the eye rolls. Better yet would be engaging in something genuinely productive - perhaps Reid could try to act as a sort of mentor, though he could think of nothing he knew that Luke might be interested in learning, except possibly the art of the sandwich. Reid supposed he could always use an ( ... )

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cherimola February 26 2011, 21:29:07 UTC
Your comment was breathtaking. *noisy kiss*

And that last sentence...seriously, took my breath.

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ltklo February 24 2011, 12:53:37 UTC
You should put your chapter titles on your LJ page. My heart did a little jump when I first read this one "Inside Luke" and then realized "where" it meant.

I thought this chapter was lovely! The description of Luke's brain, Reid imagining all the ways that he could "connect" to Luke as a friend, and Reid realizing his strong feelings toward Luke.

The Reid/Luke convo and hand touching - swoony :)

Loved the turnaround at the end from "squeezing" to "expanding". Lovely!

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im_with_him84 February 24 2011, 15:51:28 UTC
*raises hand*

I also thought "inside Luke" meant something else, LOL.
*is ashamed*

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cherimola February 26 2011, 21:36:04 UTC
Hehe, couldn't resist. I promise to earn the NC-17 rating one of these days… (the right way, that is)

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cherimola February 26 2011, 21:30:20 UTC
Sorry for the fake-out. ;) Your comment made me swoony.

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gradgirl_07 February 24 2011, 15:13:03 UTC
I just simply loved this whole chapter, beyond words, as you know. The slow realization, which was hitting us all on the head, was perfect. And I think I esp. loved flirty!Luke and doctor!Reid. Can't wait to see more.

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cherimola February 26 2011, 21:30:45 UTC
Mmm, flirty!Luke. Brain damage does look good on him.

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murgy31 February 24 2011, 16:11:27 UTC
This chapter was stunning in a very very good way....

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cherimola February 26 2011, 21:31:13 UTC
Yay! Thanks. :)

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shar_jere February 24 2011, 19:47:13 UTC
I have feelings for Luke (shocker) lol
I can't put into words how i feel about this fic so am just going with amazing like always :P

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cherimola February 26 2011, 21:31:36 UTC
I love your 'amazings.' ♥

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