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cherimola February 2 2011, 18:24:40 UTC
Thanks for the feedback, love. And for helping out with the definition of “outlier” - it may show up again in a few other contexts. ;) That sentence also allowed me to proselytize for “data” being plural. :)

In other words Reid, you're fucked.

Any day now. ;)

I thought Reid having sex with a woman was gross, but then you had to up the ante and make Luke do it.

*does some cackling of her own*

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chameleonen February 2 2011, 16:22:31 UTC
I never doubted that Luke could make a straight man gay...

Hope you will upload more frequently as I would like to see some man on man action and I would love to read about Reid's first kiss with a man...

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cherimola February 2 2011, 18:28:17 UTC
The force is strong with Luke...

And I can't wait to write those scenes (spoiler!), so I'll certainly do my best...

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joann414 February 2 2011, 16:33:31 UTC
Just re-read all of this. I like the way it keeps you wondering dream or reality. great read

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cherimola February 2 2011, 18:29:37 UTC
Thanks! Did you recognize what they were watching on TV? ;)

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zippy2825 February 2 2011, 17:16:01 UTC
The writing is wonderful. I am surprised to find myself totally involved with Reid's self-realization about Luke. Also, it is a little disconcerting to find that I have an aversion to Reid's initial hook-up with Katie. What is that about? Why am I preferring the possibility, indeed the inevitability, of gay sex more? A question for my shrink perhaps?

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cherimola February 2 2011, 18:36:22 UTC
Thanks for your comment! And no worries -- this story seems to have triggered a global epidemic of straight women being nauseated by straight sex. :)

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vseph February 2 2011, 21:36:28 UTC
I'm not sure if it's the het sex that bothers me as much as it's Reid & Katie, who were basically like brother and sister in the show. Then you add in Luke, who in a lot of the fan fiction on here, people have them related to each, enough that I now see them this way.( I'm not really sure if they were really related on the show) So I think that feeling people have is it feels vaguely incestuous. I'm beginning to want Katie to disappear forever now (like how I feel when Noah spends too much time in the stories), so thank goodness for your final notes about ending it.

I didn't realize the entire chapter was a dream.

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cherimola February 3 2011, 23:55:59 UTC
Though it still feels plenty wrong, it's probably easier for me to accept Katie and Reid as I'd been snookered in the beginning into thinking they'd be a couple. I had no trouble switching gears, though. ;) As for the incest angle, the pairing was supposed to be disturbing (at least to Reid), though I suppose Katie and Luke are only about as related as your average soap pairing. :) And I guess I have a high tolerance there, too, what with being a Tammy and Jonathan fan...

I'm beginning to want Katie to disappear forever now
Just give me time. :)

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