First Love, Chapter 21

[cherimola]

Comments

[sripley]

HOLY SHIT.
i need to lock myself in a freezer for a while after this.
oh, the comments i could leave.
but i shall behave myself.

that was quite possibly the hottest thing i've ever read.
and it's so ironic, because i was JUST commenting the other day, i think on "follow-up" when luke and reid simply MENTIONED 69, how i'd yet to read a 69 fic in this fandom.
that was the hottest fucking 69 in the history of 69s. just sayin' xD

because i haven't said it enough; ily.
<3

[cherimola]

Ooh, I love it when you talk dirty to me.

[sripley]

haha ;D

[murgy31]

OMG!!!!!! That was freaking hot! The link on LuRe was broken, so I hunted it down here and I am SOOOOO glad I did.... AWESOME Chapter!

[cherimola]

Thank you! And thanks for letting me know about the link.

[rtruffles]

Wow that was hot and beautiful. I cracked up when Reid brought up Noah and the line from Luke about women being better writers.LOL For me the best part was the overall connection between the two of them that you made so real. This was not just sex, or making love this was souls connecting.

Wonderful job!!

[cherimola]

I'm so glad you felt the connection! And someone should write a fanfic about Luke reading fanfic :)

[csigeekfan]

Excuse me while I go run naked through the snow to cool down.

Damn, there isn't any. It's still summer.

[cherimola]

Ha! I'll try to time my next chapter better.

[bluemagicrose]

Oh good lord. I think you've just killed me. I can't even think right now. That was...nnnngggghhhh.

Hottest 69 ever. EVER. You and this story is just perfection.

[cherimola]

Wow, thanks! I'll be sure to put that on my resume ;)