“Exactly. That’s what made it worse. They raised dashing hopes to an art form.” Ouch! But I loved how you tied together the disappointed of the Bosox and Luke.
Reid's reticence to talk is exactly what you would expect fromm his character - but its really beginning to concern me - how on earth is Luke going to break through these barriers????
You only planned 4????? I am SO happy that you decided to tell this story with the pace it deserved - seriously, I love your writing - have you had anything in the mm romance genre published?
To be honest, I hadn't initially expected them to leave the hotel room (setting the story in NYC was my way of keeping that option in reserve). And this is my first attempt at writing fiction, so definitely nothing published (but thanks for the compliment!).
Comments 17
Ouch! But I loved how you tied together the disappointed of the Bosox and Luke.
Reply
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
And it only got hotter from there! :D
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment