First Love, Chapter 8

[cherimola]

Comments

[ltklo]

“Exactly. That’s what made it worse. They raised dashing hopes to an art form.”
Ouch! But I loved how you tied together the disappointed of the Bosox and Luke.

[shar_jere]

With an effort that was almost physically painful, Luke ignored the wave of lust. This was one chess game he had no intention of losing. EPIC!!

[cherimola]

Thank you for this comment! Bringing in the real world is always a bit tricky. But I couldn't resist. And yes, the parallels were intentional ;)

[snowmore]

Reid was now gumming him through the thin cotton.

And it only got hotter from there! :D

[cherimola]

Glad you liked it! *she says while blushing*

[luvflix]

Reid's reticence to talk is exactly what you would expect fromm his character - but its really beginning to concern me - how on earth is Luke going to break through these barriers????

[cherimola]

Now you see why there needed to be so many chapters - instead of the originally planned four(!) :)

[luvflix]

You only planned 4????? I am SO happy that you decided to tell this story with the pace it deserved - seriously, I love your writing - have you had anything in the mm romance genre published?

[cherimola]

To be honest, I hadn't initially expected them to leave the hotel room (setting the story in NYC was my way of keeping that option in reserve). And this is my first attempt at writing fiction, so definitely nothing published (but thanks for the compliment!).