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#357: The Amazing Cat(like) Man

Sep 12, 2016 00:10

Prompt: #357
Title: The Amazing Cat(like) Man
Pairing: Chen/Sehun
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: lame attempt at humour
Word count: 9490
Summary: Superstar extraordinaire Oh Sehun falls in love at first sight with the cute Chinese staff member Chen, who may not be who he appears to be. Luhan is a very supportive friend.
Author's note: First of all, a huge ( Read more... )

4: chen's birthday 2016, pairing: chen/sehun, rating: pg-13

Comments 25

rosevic87 September 13 2016, 05:33:27 UTC

CHENHUN :) I figured Chen would be Korean hehehe and I had a feeling he might be the one junmyeon tried to set up XD poor sehun made a fool out of himself but of course with the help of Luhan. I really enjoyed this!

onyxamethyst October 7 2016, 20:46:59 UTC

Hi, thank you for being the very first commenter for my very first fic! :) And thanks for reading, so glad you enjoyed it! ^0^

anonymous September 13 2016, 18:14:29 UTC

luhan you fart omg i cackled so hard. i adore this fic. it has a good dash of everything i love and poor jongdae being mistaken as chinese all the time OTL.. sehunnie was really cute in this and god bless jongdae. thanks author, this was a pleasure

onyxamethyst October 7 2016, 20:59:09 UTC

Being able to make you cackle with this crack fic means so much to me! Thanks for reading! =)

thebakaberry September 13 2016, 18:20:57 UTC

That was so adorable!!! Just the letter and the referenced song lyrics (I don't know if you used other songs but the only one I really know were the ones from wolf and I'm crying) and also the end with Jongdae's poster it was just fantastic. Thank you so much for writing this you did a great job!!!

onyxamethyst October 7 2016, 21:04:30 UTC

I just had to squeeze Joonmyun into the ending somehow, can't resist it! Thank you for reading and commenting! ;)

thechenesis September 14 2016, 03:24:06 UTC

Firstly, I feel I should say your attempts at humor weren't lame at all! There were quite a few jokes that made me smile/laugh, especially Luhan's overall characterization (isn't he really just a diva?) and the hints at lyrics. Luhan's letter was THE. BEST. THING, I was rolling on the floor with so much secondhand embarrassment... I felt so sorry for Sehun lol

“Dear Chen Chen,” Yixing reads, voice trembling with mirth. “My darling citrus fruit. You might be astonished to receive this letter, but I can simply no longer conceal my blossoming love and desire for you.”
Although it's way too pompous I didn't find this part that bad if it wasn't for the "darling citrus fruit." why so tacky, Luhan, just whyyy

“You are the mesmerizing yet mysterious full moon to my inner wolf, the untouchable innocent beauty to my raging beast.”
I COULDNT HANDLE THIS PART I SIMPLY COULDNT
but it actually gets worseee

“Your tempting blood is the only ambrosia in the world I crave desperately for.”
WHY WOULD HE WRITE THISSSS

“Oh babe, how I wish to spread ( ... )

onyxamethyst October 7 2016, 21:26:50 UTC

Omg hi I literally squealed when I read this lovely, really long comment hahaha ^0^ Thank you so much for complimenting my attempts at humour, that means a lot to me! <3

So happy that you liked that XiuHan scene! ;) And in my mind Joonmyun actually has no idea that Jongdae is Chen hahaha, thanks for pointing that out!

Thank you again for reading and leaving such an amazing comment!

grimmrose September 16 2016, 20:02:43 UTC

This was so sweet and funny and well written AND I LOVE THIS
Thank you for writing!!

onyxamethyst October 7 2016, 21:29:50 UTC

Thank YOU for reading and your kind comment!!!!!! ^0^