#515: peachy days

Sep 12, 2016 00:06

Prompt: #515
Title: peachy days
Pairing: chen/suho, (implied) sehun/tao
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Word count: 5310
Summary: farming is made a little easier for Oh Sehun when he accidentally recruits a minor diety to his cause.
Author's note: this was my first exchange, thank-you to patient mods who were so organized n wonderful and to the ( Read more... )

4: chen's birthday 2016, rating: g, pairing: chen/suho

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thechenesis September 14 2016, 03:01:05 UTC
OH MY GOD, I'm squealing over how adorable this was! When I went back to check which prompt it was, I remember I had expected something different, but I honestly liked how you didn't make Chen to be any kind of specific deity. He's just a nature spring force of nature, a physical expression of literal sunshine (and wind) like you wrote (which btw sounds like a pretty good description of him ♥) just there willing to help people. Btw, I sort of loved the little detail of him sleeping on trees? It sounds very deity-ish to me, if that makes any sense, haha ( ... )

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j2ster September 14 2016, 06:34:49 UTC
this was an amazing read!! from the list of pairings and summary alone, i couldn't have expected for this to actually be jongdae and sehun-centered instead of focusing on the suchen, but this was wonderful nonetheless! i loved the subtle suchen, their warm and familiar relationship, how junmyeon was just there for jongdae and jongdae there for junmyeon. they're so in love and i thank you for that. ;u; sehun was such a clueless but eager to learn little thing and jongdae was there to guide him even if he was pretty much clueless himself! junmyeon and his river water was the most adorable thing! also gotta thank zitao for making sehun happy and help him feel a tad bit more at home. c:

also not quite sure why but i like this paragraph:
“And swings are mostly a pass time.” Without looking, he gestured lazily towards the tire swing hanging in a strong tree right off of the porch. It twisted and twirled, as if happy to be noticed.

thank you so much for writing this!! <3

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nadinadara September 17 2016, 15:25:19 UTC
so so cute! domestic suchen being so lovey dovey and sehun crushing on his newfound friends XD
well, i would too, if i were him!
this was such a nice read. i felt so satisfied at the end because all of their hard work paid off!
i felt like a proud mum haha
the part where sehun realized that he had fallen in love with zitao!! asdjhkjahgghl
adorable! thank you for writing this~ <3

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tsukarerudesu September 22 2016, 04:36:46 UTC
Junmyeon & Jongdae helping their adopted human was wonderful. I adore this.

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absuholute September 24 2016, 04:16:13 UTC
CAT CAT CAT THIS IS SO WONDERFUL I'M TEARING UP.

THIS IS LIKE A PUNCH TO THE GUT WITH NOSTALGIA BECAUSE SEHUN WITH AN UNKEMPT ORCGARD JUST SCREAMS OF HARVEST MOON AND OH MY GOSH IT REMINDS ME SO MUCH OF PLANT LIFE [ONE OF THE GREATEST SUCHEN AUS TO EXIST].

THIS IS SO CUTE AND MAGICAL AND DOMESTIC SUCHEN DOMESTIC GODS SUCHEN HNNNNG AND BAEKHYUN AS THE CAFE OWNER I'M CRYING BECAUSE I CAN'T STOP THINKING OF YOUR STORY AS A PLANT LIFE AU―AN AU WITHIN AN AU―AND FINALLY TAOTAO HAS FOUND HIS CALLING!!!!!!

JD AND JM BEING SO MARRIED IN THIS―GODS!!! I FEEL LIKE I'M SEHUN AND YOU AND JAYJAY ARE THE SUCHEN GODS I'M SCREAMING.

THANK YOU FOR THIS. I WILL REREAD THIS IN NY NEXT FREE TIME AND BE SPECIFIC WITH MY FAVE PARTS BUT I LOVE HOW JD WAS BORN LIKE, DAMN THAT IS JD AND JM HAVING A BAD HISTORY WITH THE BROOK HNNNG SO CUTE! I REGRET HAVING NOT READ THIS EARLIER BEFORE THE REVEALS AND GUESSING CAUSE MOST LIKELY I'D BE SCREAMING SONETHING LIKE, "JAYJAY I FEEL YOU IN THIS STORY PLEASE SHOW YOURSELF!" Hnnng.

OKAY I'LL HAVE TO STOP SCREAMING NOW ( ... )

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