#321: i want (a whole new world) with you

Sep 06, 2015 07:34

Prompt: #321
Title: i want (a whole new world) with you
Pairing: Suho/Chen
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 10075
Summary: meet jongdae: lowkey irresponsible student who likes to get drunk and watch disney movies. meet junmyeon: responsible ra who’s sometimes scared to be brave.
Author's note: dear prompter, I changed the prompt slightly and I hope that ( Read more... )

3: chen's birthday 2015, rating: pg-13, pairing: chen/suho

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shinealightrose September 7 2015, 06:28:20 UTC
oh wow- Jongdae doing the "hyunngg" begging for Junmyeon to just 'fess up and ask him out was beautiful! And probably canon, because how else could these two actually be.
Minho was so sly, lmao.

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taorific September 23 2015, 23:50:47 UTC
Probably canon bc I could totally imagine Jongdae being really insistent about it. Something like "of course you like me too, I mean, how could you not??" and act totally nonchalantly about it.
Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment! ♡

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bianca747 September 7 2015, 22:15:07 UTC
This comment might be bit of a mess because it's basically things I wrote down when reading.

Suchen and Disney movies! What's not to love about that.

Beginning had me giggling like mad because of Jongdae's antics. And then poor Joonmyun appears and gets roped into Jongdae's drunken karaoke movie night. XDD

Aww, those little moments during the night which show how Joonmyun (probably) likes Jongdae more than he'd like to admit.

I'm giggling at random bits while reading. The humor is A+. Also, best friends Baekchen and 2ho. :D Baekhyun can be annoying but he can be nice too (even if he may have some ulterior motives about getting Joonmyun to stay with Jongdae).

Oh Joonmyun, how will you know if you won't even ask. His inner doubt makes my heart ache.

Minho seems like a great friend.

I can totally imagine Joonmyun making a list about pros and cons of confessing.

It’s Jongdae, who knows how to let loose and have fun but who also knows when to be serious. I'm not sure why this stood out so much to me. Maybe because it feels so ( ... )

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taorific September 23 2015, 08:27:16 UTC
Your comment is so precious to me thank you??? I was smiling as I read through what you wrote and it makes me so glad that I could contribute to this fest.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the humour! It's not something I write a lot but I've been wanting to write more and this fic gave me the chance to experiment because it was screaming at me to write Baekhyun as the kind of best friend that's like "hey I love you but I also love making fun of you"

Thank you again for leaving this lovely comment, and I'm really happy you enjoyed my fic ♡

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krishoislove September 8 2015, 01:19:43 UTC
This is just so sweet! I definitely teared up at the end when Jongdae was telling Junmyeon how much he was worth it ;~; This was such a great read! And I loved all the disney references :) Thanks for sharing this awesome piece!

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taorific September 23 2015, 23:54:36 UTC
When I was writing Jongdae I was hoping to show him having some substance and not just that kid who gets drunk and sings Disney? I wanted to show that he was also sensitive to Junmyeon's insecurities and was emotionally mature enough to handle it. uwu

Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment!! ♡

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gellis813 September 8 2015, 03:49:31 UTC
Awesome story! This so much fun to read! I love all the movie references. Thank you for writing such a great story^^

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taorific September 23 2015, 23:55:02 UTC
Thank YOU for reading and for leaving a comment :> ♡

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yeolis September 8 2015, 11:47:58 UTC
This was so cuteeeeeeeeeee! Thanks for sharing~

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taorific September 23 2015, 23:56:33 UTC
Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment!! ♡

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