Prompt: #201
Title: coasting
Pairing: chen/xiumin
Rating: nc-17
Warnings: lapslock
Word count: 8.2k
Summary: the voice that whispers between your ears before you fall asleep, that's the one you pay attention to. jongdae hosts an indie radio channel. minseok works 5 days a week and tunes in on his morning drive.
Author's note: op, i hope this
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the playlist you suggested really fit the story and omg
“yeah, i’m usually picky about who i let in my mouth, but minseok’s cute enough.”
THIS LINE. REALLY. MINSEOK IS ALL AROUND CUTE AND SEXY. THERE IS NO IN BETWEEN.
astro cat yawns; minseok groans, shaking his head, “he’s all like look into your eyes, and i’m just butter-butterflies, you know? a right mess.”
NOBODY CAN RESIST KIM JONGBAE. minseok pls.
he leans over to his side to kiss jongdae again. now, he has another creature comfort to add to his shower list: #1 jongdae kim, boyfriend.
[SCREAMS] #1 JONGDAE KIM, BEST BOYFRIEND EVER.
(okay i'm done good bye thank you for this fic, i'm going to wilt in the corner now and will probably come back again to reread this because it is wonderful and amazing. okay i love you)
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the setting and the characters and your prose and ugh the sex too (kinky sex would also be beautiful, i chose to believe)
and ahhhh certain parts, like minseok being married to his job, and ohhhhhh playful banter and bickering over music (that's my favorite thing tbh), and the way they're complementary pieces that fall so easily into each other
like how jongdae's introduction in his life was a welcome sort of chaos to the perfect routine of his life, just shaking up, making him get divorced from his work ;;
like yeah this line
minseok has been so used to the tranquil humdrum of life that he’s forgotten what it was like to be spontaneous, adventurous, himself and not this boring, lonely shell of the minseok he once was. jongdae came in and shook everything up, turned over his neat piles of colour-coordinated socks and made him feel again
and also oh god the diasporic angst and minseok kinda comforting him through that,
oh those parts all hurt in a really beautiful way
just so well-written and realand the ( ... )
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