Newcastle Metro Arena Review: organised-sound.com

[mr_sheen666]

 LostAlone are a very strange band to be opening this evening's show. Despite their admirable efforts in crowd involvement and ability to switch between self-proclaimed "heavy metal" and "death metal" guitar riffs, their place on this tour remains a mystery. After releasing their debut album well over three years ago, and disappearing completely

Comments

[rosalui]

Poor LostAlone. They haven't been getting much good coverage from the fans or the reporters. :\

Great review though it kind of sounds like a fan not a journalist wrote it, Idk. I know the two aren't mutually exclusive, but.

[surrrrah]

hey! i'm actually sarah jamieson, and i am indeed, a fan. just out of interest of improving my writing, what was is it that made you feel like that? i think the journalist/fan threshold is a really difficult one to deal with and so any advice is a positive!
otherwise, thank you for reading and i'm glad you liked it.

[rosalui]

Hiii bb! It was a lovely review, and really well written - I didn't mean anything bad by what I said in terms of your actual writing. :)

I think one thing that might have clued me in was the way you used words that fandom uses a lot? Sort of like that one article a while back that called Gerard 'sassy,' and it was just like, LOL GURL, YOU TOTALLY GO HERE. Again, that's not a bad thing! But you did write Every time a Killjoy appears without first explaining what a Killjoy was, meaning you both were familiar with the term and were expecting your readers to be? Stuff like that

[surrrrah]

oh no, i totally understand! as i say, i'm trying to take in as much as possible to improve my writing because at the end of the day, we're all constantly learning

[irlyneedaname]

I need to see BPH live like whoa. Hope they play it at my show!!

Side note- anyone know about what time the show usually ends?

[irlyneedaname]

Yay! Thank you!! :)