Fic: All Is Said

[chellefic]

Fandom: SGA
Pairing: John/Rodney
Rating: G
Category: First Time
Spoilers: The Shrine
Summary: After "The Shrine," John and Rodney return to the pier.

Title is from Victor Hugo: A kiss, and all is said.

Comments

[springwoof]

John had a handsome face, but somewhere along the way Rodney had stopped noticing.

I really liked that observation. John's self had become so essential to Rodney that he just stops noticing the surface wrapping because it's not relevant--John could be blue and have scales (Conversion, anyone?), but he'd still be John. Rodney had never had anyone in his life like John. John was unique. And the way Rodney felt about him was unique, too.

how thoughtful and moving that is!

[chellefic]

Thank you!

I'm really pleased you liked it, especially those bits.

John could be blue and scaly and John would love him anyway.

[helenkacan]

::sighs in contentment::

You are really doing the sensitive fanon thing. Again.

But, I think you got carried away with the word like: Everyone else in Atlantis looked like at John like he was a big damn hero....

::goes back to sighing and imagines S5 without the cruel dismisal of John's feelings at the beginning of Tracker::

[chellefic]

I edited that sentence several times and apparently missed a word the last time through.

Glad you liked the fic. Thank you.

[lamardeuse]

Oh, this is so sweet and quiet. Love this moment.

[chellefic]

Thank you, hon.

::sniffs::

[anitac588]

I just melted... this is so sweet.

[chellefic]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[lysambre]

Absolutely lovely :)

Thank you ^_^

[chellefic]

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it.