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[chekhovsrifle]

Ahh you're right. Thirteen isn't very happy about her going back to Chase at all. Don't worry though, Cameron knows what to do :P
Thanks for commenting :) they keep me writing.

[crimsonwhisper]

Great chapter, I have been really enjoying this story. This last part, the whole moment between them, seemed, painfully real lol. Can't wait for more.

[annechonps]

AAAAH! I was caught off guard when I saw this new posts! So happy, soooo happy! I love the way you handled the story - didn't push it too much neither wrote it too softly (that's rare!)
This chapter in particular, made me hold my breath. Their kisses were adorable. Very anxious for the future, that's for sure!

[infinitlight]

There's an interesting parallel between food and sleep in this story. I didn't want to comment on it too much until I see how it all plays out.

I like the hesitancy and the awkwardness here, and the way it all seems to melt away when they're kissing. Awwww.

(That was my mushy romance-y comment for the day. No more now.)

[chekhovsrifle]

I had only kind-of noticed the sleep/food parallel before you pointed it out. I wanted there to be something really private and intimate that Thirteen had previously reserved just for herself. As viewers we know that she practically gives sex away, so I just wanted to show another level of intimacy that Thirteen is capable of, and I decided to give her a little bit of an eating complex

[infinitlight]

I did wonder if the food/sex contrast was deliberate or if I was imagining it