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cheese_on_sauce

What happens next?

May 10, 2012 23:53

Title: What Happens Next?
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Onho, slight KyuhyunxOnew
Warnings: mushy?
Word count: 7276
Summary: In which Minho is a quidditch player and married to a neglectful Jinki who owns a book store. Magical & Post-Hogwarts AU!
Disclaimer: This story is meant to be a supplement to one by static_abyss. As a result, some of the dialogue was not written by ( Read more... )

fanfic, onho, shinee

Comments 8

cheese_on_sauce May 11 2012, 03:56:01 UTC

static_abyss

static_abyss May 12 2012, 00:50:03 UTC

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static_abyss May 12 2012, 02:01:14 UTC

First off, your location. LET'S GO SEE SUPER JUNIOR \o/

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static_abyss May 12 2012, 00:43:21 UTC

I can explain this:

In the beginning, Jinki said that the only way Taemin was going to enjoy the divination class was if he was half centaur, half seer. And at the end it turns out he's actually talented at divination, so both professors claim exactly what Jinki said (ie that Taemin has centaur blood and that he has seer blood). And Taemin's mom is basically all "i don't care if jinki is paying for your school or if your professor is a centaur or if your a seer. you're my son, not theirs."

orz I do lots of things like this. My titles are inside jokes too :(

oconje May 12 2012, 05:01:25 UTC

I really loved the original story by static abyss and love your spin on it from Minho's POV. It's almost like reading twilight from Edwards POV! Great job!

keziayansen May 13 2012, 08:10:19 UTC

OMO... I think if I didn't read the first story (jinki's POV) maybe I'll think that Jinki is really a "bad" lover, kekeke......
I think u should make it a little bit clear between them, cuz honestly, in this story Jinki seems being a really bad lover....
well, it's okay....
Since I love this story as well as the first, hehe
Thank u

littlehalcyon May 29 2012, 18:04:32 UTC

I read the static_abyss's story a while ago and loved it, and I was directed over to your story. It's been on my list of things to read and I can't believe it took me so long. This is awesome! In Jinki's version I really felt for him and his loneliness, and I wasn't really paying attention to Minho's pain as much. My mom always says their are two sides to every story, but wow, you really nailed it. Both pieces were so strong at portraying the dysfunctional relationship. I kind of wanted to kick Jinki in the butt a little bit after reading yours because Minho was trying so hard for them. But I know Jinki wasn't really bad, and after months away from your lover, the being left is likely to feel lonely and tired. And even though I knew they would end up together I was still nervous that wouldn't make it. haha. Anyway it was a really good, and I loved seeing things through Minho's eyes. :)