Fic - As Sin's True Nature Is, Part Four

[pandaklok]

Title - As Sin's True Nature Is, Part Four - Strength and Weakness
Author - pandaklok 
Pairing - Pickles/Toki
Rating - NC-17 for sex and violence
Summary - Skwisgaar gets some news he's been waiting for, and Seth, Pickles and Toki go to a bar.
Notes - I kinda can't believe I'm on part four of this, and there is at least one more part left. This has truly become

Comments

[w_the_polluter]

"The Fic That Wouldn't Die." Yeeeesss, let the words flow forth. The fic shall live!

Hokay, first of all, "de splatters faction" and "to de notes of" cracked me up. And when he suddenly worries that Murderface was still in the room... my first thought wasn't that he could have overheard the phone call, it was "NOES. WE DIDN'TS... oh. We didn'ts. Ha."

For some reason, I had actually expected Seth to get away with... something, even after Skwisgaar's threat. Now I feel like I should've known all along that Toki would kick his ass. Okay, maybe I was hoping to see Pickles get violent... but either one getting his punching on is pretty fuckin' sick

[pandaklok]

I really look forward to your comments on these chapters. I love that you take so much from all of this and look so deeply into the characters' psychologies. Any comments I get at all are awesome but yours just blow me away.

I've been on some bummer trips so I write from experience. No bloodshed or melodrama, though, just sunburns and beaches being closed due to shark attacks. :/

[w_the_polluter]

Aww, thanks. I do try to put some effort into my comments, I spent like 20 minutes to half an hour on that one. And I fuckin' love picking apart character psychology, and there's a good amount of that going on here so I've got plenty of stuff to ramble on about. I think that discussion about Pickles and Toki helped tons, though. (So did watching TV.)

Whaaat. I think there have been shark sightings near me lately, and that's just fucked up. Why the hell would sharks want to come to the Jersey shore? Also, there was one shit vacation I had in Orlando, when my brother got a heinous ear infection and my dad locked the keys in the rental car. At least watching him crawl to the back seat through the trunk was funny. I was the only one who had fun that whole week.

[pandaklok]

We were in Panama City when it happened. We just decided to head down there in the middle of the night, because our friends were drunk, yet somehow convinced us sober people that going to PCB would be a great idea, even though we barely had any money. But we went anyway, I got one of the worst sunburns of my life, no sleep for three days, and we couldn't go swimming because a little girl got eaten by a shark (the last part had me pretty much in tears the entire weekend even though i didn't see it).

[downmoon]

Yes! Love that this fic won't die- LET IT GO BABY. I liked the mix of humor and seriousness in this chapter- Toki's dumb phrases coupled with the startling maturity of Pickles. Nice combo!

[pandaklok]

Haha, okay, but don't say I didn't warn you! ;)

Seriously though, I'm really glad you like this. This comm is great and I love being a part of it. :)

[downmoon]

Yay!

[nugatorytm]

That'll teach Seth to grab someone's junk while they're taking a mean piss. It's too bad Toki and Pickles didn't double-team him, he so deserved it.

[pandaklok]

Yeah he did, but poor Pickles, at least in this fic, feels somewhat guilty that he and his brother don't get along, even if it's not his fault at all. Besides, we all know Toki is fully capable of doing way more damage than he did.

[nugatorytm]

Poor Pickles, they've laid the guilt on him for so long, he's starting to believe it.

And yes, Toki can do way more damage, especially if he's sober.