Comments | cheekymice: Part 4 of The Tempest....Ending 1...PLEASE READ THE NOTE!!

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Part 4 of The Tempest....Ending 1...PLEASE READ THE NOTE!!

Feb 12, 2007 20:21

Title: The Tempest
Author: cheekymice.
Rating: PG
Beta: Oh soooo not beta-ed!!...all its many mistakes are mine.
Disclaimer: I don't own The OC, Ryan or Benjamin McKenzie.
Story: For dunbaby...snagged from an idea over at oc_plotbunnies.
Notes: There are two endings to this fic so I can try and please everyone! One for the people who like Fluff McFluffy endings ( Read more... )

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Comments 33

philippa_ February 12 2007, 20:43:40 UTC

Oh my God you killed him!!
I love how you captured what everyone was thinking seperately but yeah I can't believe you killed him. I'm looking forward to your fluffy ending.

cheekymice February 12 2007, 21:27:34 UTC

I have been known to kill him many times before. ;)

philippa_ February 12 2007, 21:41:36 UTC

yes and each time it catches me by suprise :P

Poor Ryan

yessi_5 February 12 2007, 21:00:47 UTC

Gaaah, I was so thrilled that there is an update that I completely ignored the note. And the warning.

Good thing the fluffy ending is posted as well, so I can go over there and forget that you killed him.

cheekymice February 12 2007, 21:28:18 UTC

*sigh* And I put that note on especially for you and Kat!!

Hee.

60schic February 12 2007, 21:04:10 UTC

Given new life...only to be slapped down again.

Boy, I sure am glad this ending didn't happen. Nope, never happened. So now I can just ask that pesky ole cheeky when her ending will be coming along and I'll wait (im)patiently for someone named McFlufferson to come along....

cheekymice February 12 2007, 21:28:46 UTC

Hee...wipe it from your mind Chic! :)

ctoan February 12 2007, 21:51:05 UTC

You know I read this ending first. :)

Awesome, as usual. I noticed that you tried some different things with this fic, spreading out your writing wings. I like what you did.

Off to read the fluff. :)

cheekymice February 12 2007, 21:58:28 UTC

I figured you would. :)

I did try to make it different. Not sure it worked but...hey-ho. Hee.

katwoman76 February 12 2007, 21:51:52 UTC

That's NOT angst, that's a mean devastating horrible, not acceptable version of the real story *glares at cheeky*
And no, I have not read it till the end.
*goes to read the real story*

cheekymice February 12 2007, 21:59:37 UTC

Blimey....I put a warning on for you so you didn't read!! *slaps forehead* I figured that you'd know the fluff was for you! Hee