Must Love Girls [Part Three]

May 06, 2017 00:02

Title: Must Love Girls [Part Three]
Pairing(s): TaengSic
Rating/Genre: PG-13; Girl-Meets-Dog-And-Girl
Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.
Chap. Summary: Jessica tiptoes the line between flirting and respecting Taeyeon’s reluctance.
Author's Notes: Speaking of Pokémon and Korea, who’s seen The Deflating Pikachu Read more... )

multi!shot, taeyeon, taengsic, au, snsd, pg-13, fic, jessica

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cateyes330 May 6 2017, 14:31:19 UTC
Omg what the hell??!! BRB I need to calm down first.

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checkinyourbra May 6 2017, 18:27:25 UTC
😂😂😂😘

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cateyes330 May 7 2017, 00:37:31 UTC
Okay, I've calmed down since this morning. LOL My god, the ending totally made me want to throw chairs. You've definitely made a chill/patient Jessica before but I feel like this Jessica deserves an award just for having to deal with such a dense/emo/STUPID Taeyeon. Taeyeon here just makes me want to squeeze her cheeks together and tell her to fucking listen to me because damn, this girl has some hearing issues. HAHAHAHA I'm obviously not a patient person when it comes to dense people. I get that she has problems... but... but... SO FRUSTRATING ( ... )

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checkinyourbra May 12 2017, 06:57:26 UTC
'Calmed down'. Ummmmm am I in trouble? xDD

Jessica deserves not only an award, but A GIRLFRIEND. WYD, TAEYEON?!!? Omg you called Tae stupid. HAHAHAHHA

Taeyeon here just makes me want to squeeze her cheeks together and tell her to fucking listen to me-- ....that's pretty cute. hehe

Well, if you replaced Jessica in this story, not only would Taeyeon get a piece of your mind early on, but this story would be a single part. You'd make it a oneshot! hahaha

TEAMSICA. I fully accept you as on her side. Or are you TEAMLENNON?? At least he's getting kissing action with Tae.

"But, Jessica knew lesbians. Oftentimes, they fucked based on proximity. She’d prefer for Taeyeon to notice her for her personality, her effort."

How true is this anyway?

Glad to crack you up! Ummmmmmm, it's not necessary true in my life, but I accept it as a people thing. However, lesbians are known for incestuously dating within friend groups! (Which def is a thing...)

You're welcome! I live to frustrate you all~~~

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anonymous May 6 2017, 21:46:39 UTC
Oh my god, I am loving this! I miss waiting every week for updates to your stories. 😭 And man, as minor and casual that rejection was, my heart broke a little for Jessica too. Love yourself, Taeyeon!

Glad to see you back. :) I hope you're doing well!

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checkinyourbra May 12 2017, 06:59:35 UTC
I FEEL THE LOVE. Tbh, I missed having something written for y'all every week. <3333

Awww. Please continue to support bb Jessica. She can only take so much. x222 for Taeyeon to love herself. ~___~

Thank youuuu for the warm welcome back! I've been kinda stressed lately. :(( Writing for y'all has been a major mood improver!

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wondertae13 May 7 2017, 08:29:52 UTC
Aaaaaaaaaahhh I'm heartbroken 😭 I really thought something was going to happen. I didnmt expect Jessica to be so honest, so soon, though... but still... Taengoo's all about protecting herself for some reason... a soft puppy

I loved getting to see all those thoughts from jessica, that's how we know her better. Love her omg

Thank you for such a lovely chapter <3

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checkinyourbra May 12 2017, 07:02:43 UTC
Noooooo another broken heart :((

I really thought something was going to happen. -- Heh. Didn't we all?

Taeyeon's the squishiest puppy and she withdrew once Jessica put herself out there.

Awwww I feel your love for Jessica. Even though we bounce back and force for their POVs within parts, I can tell that each chapter itself focuses more on one character. Glad you got to see more of Jessica's world. ^^

Thank youuuuuuuu for reading <333

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lenny tell taengsic they're so densy anonymous May 7 2017, 10:32:13 UTC
arghhhh almost is never enough!!!
why the hell did jessica not complete her sentence? why is taeyeon stupid? why are they both stupid? why am i loving this so much?

movie night was amazing. what movie was that? jessica was an excellent wooer until the last scene. they're so freaking cute even tho they,'re oh so clueless.

love the updates kwon!!

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Re: lenny tell taengsic they're so densy checkinyourbra May 12 2017, 07:05:41 UTC
Lennon could tell them they're being dense, but what's the fun in that? LET'S WATCH THEM FAIL SOME MORE.

why the hell did jessica not complete her sentence? why is taeyeon stupid? why are they both stupid? why am i loving this so much?-- I should just change the description of MLG to this.

I made that movie up! Sounds interesting, right?! I had plenty fun writing the movie scene with them getting to know each other. :33 There, you see Jessica's game at work, even if it didn't yield the results she wanted.

THEY ARE CUTE, RIGHT?!?!

Omggggggg Anon who calls me Kwon!!! *hugs*

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anonymous May 11 2017, 05:56:12 UTC
I can feel the turn. The discord between Taeyeon and Jessica are no longer within the realm of light, bouncy and lively fancies of infatuation, and enters into the territories of soft clashes of deep dents and bruises. Their respective bubbles are ironclad, and they keep deflecting against each other. The TaengSic emerges from underneath the priming veneer. WooOooh.

Taeng's in a bubble of guilt and abandonment, and J's in a bubble of narcissistic lack of self-awareness. The former lies to herself, and the latter is competing instead of communicating. With a dog btw, tsk.

I'm very curious to see how you untangle this puzzle. How will they connect into each other's realities? There must be a device, a breakthrough.

Checks, I leave my reader's heart in the hands of your fabulous brain. *juggles clementines*

(jk I can't really juggle muahahahha)

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anonymous May 11 2017, 06:45:23 UTC
Actually, I wouldn't say J lacks self-awareness. That's Taeyeon. Unwillingness to listen (as Taeng noted) and a lack of emotional engagement, that's J. I did say, I don't juggle well. Good thing I'm talented at redirecting attention ayyyy

I do very much admire your craft here, particularly in the complex character-building game you've brought to this fic. I feel like you've always excelled in writing relationships and dialogue, but here, on top of those things, you're putting additional care into directing the flow of feelings through colors, textures, rhythm and metaphors/similes (befitting a love story) and it's a true pleasure to read. The words really sing.

I can particularly see that in oh, how Jessica blossoms here, showing off her full power of seduction. It's like seeing a peacock strut his stuff, a lesbian version of that yaaaassss. Taeyeon is one powerful dud B-)

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checkinyourbra May 12 2017, 07:14:54 UTC
Unwillingness to listen (as Taeng noted) and a lack of emotional engagement, that's J. -- WELL SAID.

Ayyyyyyyy ;DDD

Omg thank you for appreciating what nonsense I put y'all through. I never consciously try to make my characters complex (guess it's harder to see from the outside for stuff like this), but I like layers. Layers are good. They make the writing experience fun for me. Multishots really appeal to me for the stuff you've listed. In a short sequence of chapters, I can develop this love story in any way I want. I'd love for my words to keep singing for you~

Yaaaaasssss watch Jessica strut! She's trying her best.

Again, thank you so much. <3333

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checkinyourbra May 12 2017, 07:10:59 UTC
Please don't mind my two-part reply. It's just easier while I'm so tired. :33

Taeyeon and Jessica are no longer within the realm of light, bouncy and lively fancies of infatuation, and enters into the territories of soft clashes of deep dents and bruises.-- There you go with that poetry. I agree with it, though. Now that Jessica's put herself out there, the tides have shifted. If only the deflecting would stop.

WooOooh, indeed!

Hehehe competing with the doggy. :P

Ooooo this pretty much is a puzzle, isn't it? Hope you'll like the way I go about it. I have so many ideas and they should converge into something natural.

There must be a device, a breakthrough. -- There shall be one!

JUGGLING OMG. //sits and watches in awe//

(Oh. Nvm. I'll leave.)

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUU FOR READING :DDDDD <3

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