A Ghost in Mind [Part Four]

[checkinyourbra]

Title: A Ghost in Mind [4/6]
Pairing(s): JeTi

Rating/Genre: NC-17; AU Angsty Romance

Warning(s): Sex.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: There’s more to Tiffany than meets the eye, Jessica discovers.
Author's Notes: Another rated chapter? Wuuuut. Thank you so much for the awesome feedback. Hearing from

Comments

[exp_itheta]

Here I am spawting, and feeling guilty for lagging on the previous chapter's comment (again!). >

[checkinyourbra]

Lagging with a top spot, eh? EVERYONE'S WATCHING YOU, BB.

EVERYONE.

Edit: Gurrrlll your spots are like widdle ghosts of their own. :33

[xsunray]

D: spot I AM FINALLY ALIVE ENOUGH TO READ THIS. (omg the irony. Alive vs Ghost fic)

FIRST. THANKS FOR THE HARD WORK FORMATTING EVERYTHING BY HAND. I GIVE YOU ALL MY FANGIRL LOVE.

Okayyyy I guess you didn't lie >_> It wasn't really heartbreaking, in fact it was almost comparable to fluff if you put it into perspective. Relativity is the key. But... there were still ouch moments.

Oh no I don't feel that smartypants today, I blame work and the office. My gaaaayyyy cookies D:

Before I start my try hard smartypants comment, I need to highlight a line.

“Stay with me,” Jessica breathed into her ear, shivering at her own seductive tone, “and hold me. Please.”--- omgggg this part. It's the freaking redacted part. OMG. I'd have spazzed until i died if you showed me. HEARTBREAK, EXCITEMENT, ANTICIPATION AND IDK WHAT ELSE BUT ALL THESE EMOTIONS. MY HEART. CAN'T. NO. EEEK. BEAUTIFUL

[checkinyourbra]

Well. Let's see if a certain SunnyStan/Jessbian deserves gay cookies. >:DD

Congrats on staying alive, bb. *discos*

THANK YOU. I KNOW YOU CACKLED WHILE TYPING THAT, BTW. FORMATTING'S A BIYATCH.

Yeah, in context. This is downright fluffy. This only has six parts and I don't care to torture the readers that much.......ordoI??hehehehehe:devilface:

"try hard smartypants comment"--Omggg hahahaha. I wanna give you cookies for that laugh already.

YES!!! You noticed the [redacted] segment. That would have been too much for your little teaser heart to handle. I WAS RIGHT, HUH!?! ALL YOUR FEELS ARE MAKING ME FEEL. STAHP.

I thought it'd be a good time for them to get to know each other more. And, I didn't even think about the fact that the reader is learning along with them. ALL IN THIS TOGETHER. Nobody knows nothin'~~

There's this subtle panic that I caught, not sure if it was your intention but it fits the whole chapter--Oooh gurl are you WORKING for dem cookies. *shells out a dozen*

Silly gay, Jessbian mode doesn't come in "off".

I

[checkinyourbra]

Of course I forgive you. We're kinda playing Spot Tag rn.

It's cute. ^^

[checkinyourbra]

W00hooooo to catching up!! I believe you have a third chapter of your fic I've yet to read. I gotta get on that~

Hehe your rabbit? :33 Why so fluffy without trying, kiddo? *hugs my Rilakkuma from all my karou feels* I'll try to be careful, bb...I'll try.

Yesss. As much as sex is...ya know...enjoyable, there's more to it. I'm really thrilled about your thoughts on the pacing. I wanted to keep the chapters few so that I'd pack a good amount into each one. Still, I get nervous about rushing things. D:

Reading your comment is giving me so many JeTi feels. Like, WHYY?? Glad you liked that line, bb. Tiffany wouldn't say it out loud, but she totes didn't wanna leave Jessi, huh? (Who would, though?)

Jessica deserves to be completely honestly exclusively loudly loved.--You put that very well, bb. Thank you. :3

Ahhhh thank you. >.< Angst is quite exhausting. Had fun with it, though. ^^ Awwww you're so sweeeeet.

THANKS, BB. ♥♥

[zaty11]

BENGAL HUGGGGG!

Hi! Hahaha

Wow, I never thought that these physical needs of them going to elicit an inner and more potent feelings for one another. Jessica though, despite her desperation can still managed to take a step back and think about seriously voicing her feelings while in the midst of intercourse... ;)

But Tiffany...I'm not sure that she's just abiding Jessica's demand of making love to jessica orrrrr she's sincerely saying all those sweet stuffs to jessica. Hmmm. Jessica was a bit taken aback and doubtful when she needs to pull back Tiffany to her eye level and find the truth in her eyes.

I really like how their tragedy can create an opportunity to find greater -something, not gonna say its love, not yet-.

Thanks for the slight angst and depression! Lol. :) I enjoyed it very much.

[checkinyourbra]

RAWWWWR BENGALS.

Hayyy zaty haaaaayyy

Surpriiiiise, it's not only about the sex!! :DDD hehe but really, things would be so much easier if it was just that simple, right? And you're right. Jessica's bombarded with emotions from every angle and can still attempt to think critically.

Anddd Tiffany's still a bit of a mystery.

Jessica was a bit taken aback and doubtful when she needs to pull back Tiffany to her eye level and find the truth in her eyes. --Good eye. ;D Glad you caught that.

Something greater should come out of all this, right?

LOL @ slight depression. You're welcome, bb. Thanks for dropping by ^^

[kotegawa87]

And again... this was so intenseeee! \o/
Oh my ... jessi has so many feelings and thoughts...
:o

I'm not really sure fany can understand whats's going through jessi's head... and heart...
But i guess they both deserved a try...
:)

Aaahh!!! \o\........\o\
I really enjoy your fics...
:)
They make me feel and imagine jajajaja
It's pretty awesome...
:)

Thanks

[checkinyourbra]

Intense is my middle name, dontcha know?!?!

But i guess they both deserved a try...--Ikr!?! Isn't that all anyone really wants?? :'((

Hahahaha /o/ wwwwwwoooooooshhhhh

You and your *mind* imagining all the sexiness. Oh, youuuuu. >:DDDD

Thank YOU for reading, bb~~