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checkinyourbra

New is Better [One-Shot]

Oct 24, 2013 01:06

Title: New is Better [One-Shot]

Pairing(s): YoonYul

Rating/Genre: PG, AU Fluff

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.
Chap. Summary: A cute hairstylist can fix a broken heart.

Author's Notes: My entry for the YoonYul 3rd Fanfic Contest on Soshified (8/8/2013). Just a lil’ somethin’. Edit: At this point, I realized that ( Read more... )

pg, yoonyul, yoona, one!shot, au, snsd, fic, yuri

Comments 22

wenkey October 24 2013, 05:38:01 UTC

YOONYUL!?

hehehe nervous/shy Yuri is always adorable and has a soft spot in my heart. However, a confident Yoona is new to me. Not bad.

Now I'll have to find this Yoonyul fic contest thing to ease my Yoonyul feels...

checkinyourbra October 27 2013, 06:09:25 UTC

Yes, YoonYul! What's happening to me?!?! hehehe :3

Preshie/adorbs Yuri holds a special place in my heart, too. :3 I supremely love a confident Yoona. I may do it again! :D A fun little exercise for me. ^^

Omg yeah it was in August. Have you found it yet? If not, HERE you go! Feel away!

Thankssss~~

yuukistar22 October 24 2013, 06:04:48 UTC

YESSSSSSS! ON IT LIKE A CAR BONNET BB

I shall return after some much needed snooze time~~

Edit tiiiime: Got super excited to see that you hadn't forsaken us <3 I've always wanted to see you produce a one-shot annnnd it was just as amazing as i expected it to be.

You could've totally won with this in the contest, it was refreshing, funny and an all around great read. Gawd it feels weird to give serious feedbacks and not pervy ramblings...

Once i finished it, i leaned back on my chair and said out loud: "Yoona is one smooth motha fucker." Now i'm trying to imagine Yuri with shorter hair. Hmmmm

Also, loving the song choice bb. That is the snsd song of all songs after all.

Thanks for sharing bb, tbh i was surprised to see you update so quickly after the grand finale of WGTG. Made this particular perv very happy.

Keep up the good work bb, i'll see you around. Luff you

checkinyourbra October 27 2013, 06:28:06 UTC

CAR BONNET! I totes had to look that up haha

Omg bb. <3 I heart you so much haha. Idk I don't consider this my best work, but I think it's cute enough. Writing one-shots is still pretty new to me. >.<

Ahhhh by the final totals, I think I got roughly 5th place. So close!! haha The winners deserved it, though. Some amazing entries! Glad you found it refreshing, though, bb. ....yeah the lack of perviness is very new to me. :O

"Yoona is one smooth motha fucker."--Hellz yeah she is. Never forget that.

Kwon Yuri with shoulder-length hair would be cute. :3 Though, I'm in love with her long, luxurious hair. Picturing her with short hair is interesting...

Hehehe SUCH A WONDERUL, CLASSIC SONG. bb soshi <3 Awwww thanks, bb. I'll try not to fall off the face of the LJ world. I try to take note of every new idea. ^^

Thank youu!! Seeya around~ ♥

regreted October 24 2013, 07:13:47 UTC

excited to see something from you! even if it's like not new its still new to me. i love your style. you write kind of sparingly but detailed and your pacing here was spot on. yea. fun fun yoonyul hehe, yuri's not so stupid here. that was refreshing. lol.

checkinyourbra October 27 2013, 06:32:02 UTC

Hehe happy you liked my new-not-new story!

>.< I have a style? Thank you!! I'm still trying to get a sense of writing. Doing a one-shot was definitely a new experience haha. Glad this first attempt/exercise was well-paced. ^^

Yeah. Happy Yoonyul. It's weird considering...haha

Omg ikr!? Why isn't Yuri constantly confused here!? Where are my priorities!? :P

Thanks for commenting, bb. <3

byunq October 25 2013, 04:02:17 UTC

ayeeee............ my yoonyul feeling! btw i love dominant yul more xP

checkinyourbra October 27 2013, 06:32:53 UTC

Feelings everywhere! Haha I enjoy both dominant Yul and Squishy!Yul. :D

Thanks for dropping by, bb!! :D

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checkinyourbra October 27 2013, 06:45:02 UTC

Yay refreshment! Oh gorl. I remember going through those stories. Many were really nice, but all the angst. Haha I wasn't feeling angsty at all, so I wasn't about that life. Hence, FLUFF.

IRL Yoona already has that aloof, cool girl vibe going on, so I agree. Rebellious Yoona wouldn't be a stretch. I love teasing my Yuri characters. SHE'S SO CUTE. XD

*Bows* Thank you, Queen of All Things Fluffy. Kid on the Fluff Throne. XD

*totally inappropriate squealing* OMG ISN'T YOONSIC SO PERF?! LOVE THEM SO MUCHHH. <3 They should get married, tbh. I'm so proud that you acknowledge their superiority cuteness! Thanks, Kid!!