The Real LJ Idol - Week 2

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This is my entry for Week 2 of LJ Idol (

Comments

[mamas_minion]

this is a heartbreaking tale, but you wove it brilliantly. I felt like I was watching a movie reading this.

[cheapxdate]

Thank you. It was quite cathartic to write out and I'm just glad I was able to do it justice!

[eternal_ot]

Aww..<3 This was heart-achingly beautiful. Well written! My heart went out for her and I am feeling so sad. Great read :)

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Thank you very much for reading and for the kind comment. I'm glad that my words were able to capture those feelings.

[bewize]

This was amazing. I was utterly captivated and my heart aches for that not-quite-love.

[cheapxdate]

This is a wonderful comment to receive as a writer! Thank you for reading, and I'm glad that my words were able to capture those feelings accurately.

[n3m3sis43]

This was riveting. The voice, the pacing -- really everything about it -- turned a classic story which could have easily felt cliched into something I couldn't stop reading. Really great work. :)

[cheapxdate]

This is such a wonderful comment - thank you! I was hoping to strike the right balance with the pacing and number of anecdotes so I'm really glad to hear that you found that successful.

[m_malcontent]

Sad but very effective and evocative.

[cheapxdate]

Thank you for reading :)