Best Forgotten, Part 22 And Happy New Year!

[chazper]

Please forgive me, flist. With all the holiday celebrations, continued school responsibilities (yes, even over break) and my pitiful (failed) attempt to keep up with the Advent challenge, this update was written sporadically over the last few days. It's not revised or even proofread, but since it's the last day of the month--and the year!--I'm

Comments

[chicletinho]

OMG is it chapter 22 already? Wow!
What a cliffhanger... great chapter, can't wait for more.
Please please update soon?

[beachtree]

Da-dum! Noooooooooo! Not a whole month.

Felix, you are now the cavalry. Oh the guilt for the Cohens. All that wasted time, home and abroad- right down to the tour of Cozumel.

As much as the cliffhanger is using the very edge with an unsteady fingerhold, you've superimposed the internal and external, and hopefully memories that aren't Ryan's last, to give him some semblance of comfort in the midst of the hellish nightmare.

Happy New Year, and may Ryan have a new year and one that he's able to comprehend!

[fredsmith518]

firstly, thank you and happy new year!
my that was a ride, I really liked the description of Lucy being hyperaware of her surroundings at the beginning

[chazper]

That description was the only bit of revision I managed--I'm so glad it worked for you. And happy new year to you and your family too!

[chazper]

Happy New Year to you too. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Now . . . must figure out what happens next!

[finlee]

Oh the anxiety! Thanks for another great chapter! I must admit, I'm hoping the next chapter pops up today. No worries though!

[chazper]

I'm afraid the next chapter won't appear for at least a couple weeks. Hope it's worth the wait. Oh, and Happy New Year!

[finlee]

The chapters are definitely worth the wait!