The Value of O Negative (part 1 of 2)

[chazper]

Nothing finale inspired here. This is a missing scene for "The Night Moves," prompted by--well, shall we say some dissatisfaction among certain members of my flist. Actually, I suppose it's two missing scenes, since there will be another part that I envision taking place after a commercial break.

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[malinr]

I hope Seth heard the "Sandy" too. Thank you for filling in the missing scene. Hugs

[chazper]

Everyone heard the "Sandy".

Thank you for reading and responding.

[60schic]

Only thing that could possibly have made this better would have been if after Ryan thought Frank was Sandy, that he had somehow also implied to Frank that 'Sandy = Dad'

Thank you for this missing scene...and for more to come still.

[chazper]

Only thing that could possibly have made this better would have been if after Ryan thought Frank was Sandy, that he had somehow also implied to Frank that 'Sandy = Dad'

I may try to do something about that in part 2!

Thank you for this missing scene...and for more to come still.

Of course, I have another story to beta first! (I have my priorities, you know.)

[60schic]

;)

[chaseii]

I absolutely loved this scene -- I'm sending you an email with further comments because lj eats my words.

So many thanks! Brilliant, Chaz!

[chazper]

Thanks so much, chase. I'm looking forward to your comments.

[chaseii]

Hee! Ironic that hotmail ate the attachment I sent you, isn't it?

At least the attachment was a saved document, so it isn't just floating out there in cyberspace never to be retrieved and sent again!

[anne35]

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was so upset when I heard that Ryan was unconscious and we didn't get to see it. And now here you went and filled that void in my life.
At first I was upset when Frank called Ryan "kid". I couldn't help but think that only Sandy can call Ryan that. But then it just me smile and feel all warm and fuzzy when Ryan just assumed it was Sandy there to save him.
Can't wait for part two.

[chazper]

I debated about letting Frank use the term "kid," because I didn't want it to seem that the only reason Ryan thought Sandy had come was because he heard that word. But I decided to use it to indicate that Frank was slipping into "dad" mode--only to realize that Sandy is the only man Ryan recognizes that way.

Glad I made you smile and feel warm and fuzzy! Thanks so much for your comments.

[loracj]

Bravo. Lovely.

[chazper]

Thanks, loracj2!