That's a good poem! I like it! But, I don't really know what it is that you're talking about. Oh well...I'm just a little ditzy, I think. Anyway ... REALLY good! You've got talent!
Thanks! Umm...I think...Yeah, thank! So..what do you not understand? *tries not to make Mik feel stupid or anything*
Pergatory, perhaps? Its the place Catholics believe you go after you die, before it is decided if you go to heaven or hell. I think Catholisism is crock, like all organized religion, but it fit in the poem...so, whatever. Then the rest is just about...a bad, sinner kinda guy that saves anothers life and is just torn between heaven and hell...
Again, not trying to sound condecending or anything...jut letting you know what its about. It can also be interpreted symbolically, I guess...but thats for a reader to decide...
I was just confused as to who was the narrator in the poem, but I guess it was ABOUT Pergatory, then from the perspective of the sinner guy. I've saved someone's life before. =D
As soon as you said what Pergatory was (*Isn't Catholic...*) I automatically thought of that movie, The Tooth Faerie? I think that's what it's called... It's about this girl who goes to Pergatory, and she's issued the job Tooth Faerie. She does a good job, I guess, and goes back to Earth. Like that happens.
Organized religion sucks. Don't give in Chaxy!! I went back to Youth group, cuz it sounded fun, and the guy wants me to go on a spiritual journey to find God. Umm...No. lmao ...
Hehe...the Tooth Farie...I remember that! Wasn't it that one with Krisie Alley? She got hit by somehthing I think...*shrugs* Whatever...
YOu're right! I won't give in! *nods* Right...no giving in...I will kill any Southern Baptists who try to witness to me this school year! Wait..that might be going a little far...I'll just tell them to take their hokey religion elsewhere! Yeah, thats the way to fight Hickville...well...my small(pop. 1700) town is not actually called Hickville. That is somewhere else in Tennessee!
Oh yeah, and the whole perspective thing: Well, I didn't really even notice the change in perspective until I finished writing it, but its first person with a flash back in the middle, which is third person b/c he's watching it in his head. Hehe...There we go...makes sense now!
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Pergatory, perhaps? Its the place Catholics believe you go after you die, before it is decided if you go to heaven or hell. I think Catholisism is crock, like all organized religion, but it fit in the poem...so, whatever. Then the rest is just about...a bad, sinner kinda guy that saves anothers life and is just torn between heaven and hell...
Again, not trying to sound condecending or anything...jut letting you know what its about. It can also be interpreted symbolically, I guess...but thats for a reader to decide...
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As soon as you said what Pergatory was (*Isn't Catholic...*) I automatically thought of that movie, The Tooth Faerie? I think that's what it's called... It's about this girl who goes to Pergatory, and she's issued the job Tooth Faerie. She does a good job, I guess, and goes back to Earth. Like that happens.
Organized religion sucks. Don't give in Chaxy!! I went back to Youth group, cuz it sounded fun, and the guy wants me to go on a spiritual journey to find God. Umm...No. lmao ...
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YOu're right! I won't give in! *nods* Right...no giving in...I will kill any Southern Baptists who try to witness to me this school year! Wait..that might be going a little far...I'll just tell them to take their hokey religion elsewhere! Yeah, thats the way to fight Hickville...well...my small(pop. 1700) town is not actually called Hickville. That is somewhere else in Tennessee!
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