FIC: Transparent by Cowardly Lion

[chattycatsmeow]

Written for the 2008 Jack/Daniel Ficathon . If you've come directly to my journal, after you read the story be sure to check out the link to the ficathon for all of the other great stories.After the ficathon comes the readathon.  :)  In any event you'll find my offering below.

Title: Transparent
Author: Cowardly Lion
Summary: It was only after Jack

Comments

[chattycatsmeow]

I heart your feedback. :) Thank you!

it's like we're all in the same brain soup for this one.

Hurray for synchronicity! All I did last night was read wonderful fic after wonderful and I still have so many to go.

[magnavox_23]

Oh love! And I adore Jack's POV at the beginning of this, you don't see that enough in slash fic.

The botched make out session is just perfect, who gets it right the first go huh? XD

[chattycatsmeow]

Jack is so much fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it, even the gravity challenged bit. :)

[antares04a]

They can be really happy that they have teammates that gave them a push into the right direction. *g*

Very nice and sweet and even the not so successfull seduction is totally in character with them.

[chattycatsmeow]

Thank heavens for team mates who care, eh? :)

[green_grrl]

Jack's point system -- two thumbs up! I'll need to add this to ep viewing. :-D

This was exactly the kind of incident that brought her to her senses every time she was tempted to defy the regs and act on the physical chemistry between herself and Jack.

God, yes! This, exactly.

Teal'c + Fiddler on the Roof! *loves*

Fulfilling a woman's role should be, as O'Neill would say, a piece of cake.

*sporfle* I smell hubris!

The world tilted.
For a moment it was like being inside a snow globe as it was shaken. Everything scrambled. Swirling. Chaotic. Then the currents eased. The white flakes drifted back down in a different arrangement. From the outside the globe looked the same. Up close, the pattern of snowflakes had changed.
The world reset itself and absolutely everything had altered for Daniel.

Made of fabulous!

Daniel blurted out "Teal'c thinks you're good looking."

Aha ha ha ha ha!!! OMG! *wheeze*

"Teal'c didn't...well he did, but...then Sam...and pining...I suddenly...great ass!" Oh, god, no!!! ROTFLMAO

[chattycatsmeow]

Wow! Thanks for the detailed feedback! Glad to see you enjoyed it so much.

This fic is made of AWESOME!!! *adores*

::blushes::

Why, thank you, ma'am.

[cirisse]

Ooh... I loved it. It was funny and sweet and hot!

The teamy interaction was really good, you could really identify with Sam - and yey for meddling Teal'c!

Thank you for writing it <3

[chattycatsmeow]

Whew!!!!

The one thing I really fret over in a challenge is whether the person I'm writing for will like the story. I'm so relieved and happy that you did!