Comments | chattycatsmeow: GEN FIC: Half A Bubble by Catsmeow

chattycatsmeow

GEN FIC: Half A Bubble by Catsmeow

May 02, 2007 18:14

I've written another Young Daniel story. Fourth in the series Small Boy, Big City which follows Daniel as a nine year old boy in foster care in New York. This story takes place a few weeks after "Ragged Edges" .

MANY Thanks to Whisper for her invaluable services as Sounding Board and Muse Restorer. Thanks also to my patient and ever suffering ( Read more... )

nominations, gen, fic, stargate, angst, young daniel

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happydog57 May 2 2007, 23:00:16 UTC

Awwww. You made me all teary eyed. That was just beautiful!

chattycatsmeow May 2 2007, 23:43:31 UTC

*hands over a tissue*

Thanks! Sorry to make you sniffle, but glad that you liked it. :)

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chattycatsmeow May 2 2007, 23:44:35 UTC

Thanks, Mare

*reads icon*

Heeee!!! Perfect! love that icon!

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chattycatsmeow May 3 2007, 00:03:25 UTC

Yep, that's me, obsessive

No, no! You're "consistent" ! :)

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chattycatsmeow May 3 2007, 02:20:27 UTC

I was hoping you recognized the bit you helped with. You are in fact a very effective muse poker, even if she did need to ruminate a bit before coming up with the rest of the story. :D

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chattycatsmeow May 3 2007, 03:09:21 UTC

Indeed!!!

(hmmm...I need a Teal'c Icon to go with that. Drat.)

damietta May 3 2007, 02:33:57 UTC

I love this series. How you are unfolding Daniel bit by bit (stubborn, yet fair, inquisitive and thoughtful) is quite good. The original characters are very rich (Mr. Rumson reminds me of a certain General from Texas who will come later).

I know it is "only a story" but I'm grateful that Daniel had Sally and Cliff in his life. Two people who navigated a little boy's heartbreak with great care. And, they played Boggle!

I devour this series and hopefully, the muse will strike soon. Thanks! (I hope you don't mind if I friend you.)

Deb

chattycatsmeow May 3 2007, 03:06:59 UTC

Thanks for the feedback! With a story set in the Young Daniel years, there are no other SG-1 characters and so many original characters that I worry about boring the reader. It's good to know that's not the case!

And, they played Boggle!

I love that game when I was growing up. Still drag it out occasionally.

I hope you don't mind if I friend you

Friend away. :)

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chattycatsmeow May 4 2007, 23:28:25 UTC

Thanks, JD!

I've been finding it interesting to take the Grown Daniel taking into account the few known events of his childhood, and extrapolate backwards into the boy he probably was.

I'm just glad that others are enjoying the stories along with me. :D