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chassie730

Two Hearts, One Soul Chapter Five

Mar 20, 2011 12:18

Title: Two Hearts, One Soul

Rating: Hard R/nc-17 to be safe

Chapter:Necessity of Deceit

Summary: AU Jet survives Lake Laogai and Zuko sides with Team Avatar during the Crossroads of Destiny. But old prejudice and unresolved self hatred and shame are only some of the few obstacles facing these two. Jetko

( Chapter Five )

jet/zuko a:tla, fic

Comments 4

lillithblack March 20 2011, 17:42:15 UTC

Okay. So I think I'm in love with the first part!! Squeeeee Oh so cute first time smexx!! I can see why it would be difficult to write though *still has dozens of unpublished lemons hiding in the closet*

And oh the awkwardness when Zuko must have realized it wasn't Katara!! You make me pitty zuko so much! Poor thing! I hope the next update doesn't take to long! I really look foward to this!! ^0^

chassie730 March 22 2011, 10:13:00 UTC

Unpublished lemons? Not fair you can't tease my curiosity like that! And yeah writing lemons was a lot harder than I thought it would be... especially since the next part may or may not be full of them...

tigriswolf March 25 2011, 22:11:34 UTC

This is very interesting!

tsukiryuu March 27 2011, 22:19:54 UTC

that last meeting there on deck between Zuko and Jet, it was awkward, yet sad and funny too. Zuko thought Jet was Katara and started talking to "her" as he normally would have. The fact that Jet didn't even think that Zuko could have him mistaken for someone else and readily walked forward to stand by his side (and so aware of being on his scarred side and ready to move) was very bittersweet. Even if Jet can't admit it to himself, subconciously he's already made a decision regarding Zuko.

Dorky!Zuko FTW!