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OC Fic: The Hart Break

Feb 18, 2007 15:25

Title: The Hart Break

Chapter 3 Part 3 (*glares at lj*)

Author: ChaseII

Story Rating: PG-13(?) (minor language)

Disclaimer: The OC Universe, with all its assorted characters, belongs to Josh Schwartz, et. al. No copyright or trademark infringement is intended, nor is any money being made.

A/N: Many thanks to Beachtree for reviewing this chapter ( Read more... )

hart break

Comments 16

katwoman76 February 18 2007, 20:43:11 UTC

*wiping away a few tears while being out of words*

fredsmith518 February 18 2007, 20:47:09 UTC

Speechless, here. Well, just for a minute!
This is so interesting a set up. What the Harts know about Dawn. Actually having seen him living through the stuff he has barely spoken to Kirsten about.
btw, Dawn just won't reform will she? Stubborn, that one. Sorry digressing.
I love Sandy with his hand on Ryan's shoulder, just like Kirsten when Dawn left in the ep I can't remember the the name of, 'cos I suck at ep names!
Very much looking forward to reading the next installment when you are ready.

yessi_5 February 18 2007, 21:15:27 UTC

Wow. Just wow ( ... )

katwoman76 February 18 2007, 21:28:26 UTC

Kirsten certainly made many mistakes, but I don't doubt that she loves Ryan. While Megan's wariness towards Kirsten justified, the Harts were the ones who left Ryan. If they hadn't failed him, he wouldn't have needed the Cohen's. It's very easy for them to criticise others...
And one should never forget, especially while talking about Kirsten's early mistakes, that it's much easier to open up to a sweet little boy you meet in your public work place than to a rather mature teenager in your own home (place of safety), whom you know pretty much nothing about except that he comes straight out of juvie and got into a fight as soon as he came into town.

I really hope Kirsten gets her call and understands how much it would mean to Ryan if she actually would show her love and be a mother to him.
I hope so too. Because beside her mistakes and wariness sometimes (she is very much like Ryan in that aspect) - for me, Kirsten IS Ryan's mother now.

malinr February 18 2007, 21:16:23 UTC

WHOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You did it again. HUGS

WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thekiller00 February 18 2007, 21:16:26 UTC

That was a great chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see the rest of Ryan's visit with Megan and Sam !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP ( ... )