TFAFT Fic Crossover AU - He Knew Men 1/1

[chase65]

The last part of my TFATF fic Contact is on it's way. I wanted to get it posted before I went away from Christmas/New Years not likely now, but here is another completed TFATF that popped into my head while working on Contact. Feedbakc greatly appreciated but I may not be able to respond til after the first of the year.

Comments

[supercaptain182]

This was great for such a variety of reasons. The crossover was extremely appropriate and filled the gap between Brian and Dom. I would like to say something more eloquent, but I am having a hard time coming up with more words to describe how awesome this fic is!

Simply excellent!

[chase65]

Hey, that seems like just enough words to me. Thank you for taking the time to both read and feedback. It fuels the bunnies. I'm glad you liked it so much, it does this writer good.

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[anonymous]

This was a simply beautiful short piece which I hope to see more of. You have excellent fluidity and believability; your words are not choppy in the least and your characters convey a supremely convicing sincerity. I loved it. The only time I got a little lost was in the dialogue between Harlan and Chris, and then with Brian. Other than that it was just great. I truly enjoyed it, thank you!

Re: Feedback

[chase65]

You're welcome. And there was no intention for more, but...because I'm easy, all someone has to do is suggest they might like more and here come the ideas.

I have started writing a few scenes that would take place some years in the future, but it will probably not be done until after I complete posting Contact

of course that's what I thought about this fic.

I thought the dialogue btwn Chris and Harlan might be a little confusing if you weren't familiar with the "Eyes". Those characters had great banter and I wanted to capture at least a little of it. Thanks for sticking with the fic and commenting. That's greatly appreciated. And if I do post more it would be primarily Dom/Brian so hopefully no confusion.

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[caliadragon]

I really loved this. I never saw Eyes, but I loved the fact that you used it to bridge the gap between Brian and Dom.

Thanks
Calia

Re: Feedback

[chase65]

You are quite welcome!

[slashy_me]

awww! that was so great! I loved how it was from Chris' pov but you still conveyed Brian and Dom so completely! great job!

[chase65]

I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks for feeding the writer.

[labgirl2076]

Great to see a new fic for Dom and Brian. Any plans for another?

[chase65]

Well... as I mentioned up post. Maybe, it's a definite maybe that there will be more of this, since I have started writing a bit of a sequel.

It might be a just a little darker than "He Knew Men".