Comments | chase65: Adventures in Other Fandoms ll Inception Arthur/Eames

chase65

Adventures in Other Fandoms ll Inception Arthur/Eames

Jan 24, 2012 22:40

Just finished for Inception, Arthur/Eames. This was the kink meme request here and below http://inception-kink.livejournal.com/4946.html?thread=6091858#t6091858 . This also links to Parts 1 & 2

also want sap/angst. D:

I want Eames being put away for basically forever (lots of little, petty crimes, all heaped on top of each other), and him telling ( Read more... )

fic:slash, arthur/eames

Comments 6

shaded_sun January 26 2012, 13:06:22 UTC

I love the way you deal with the realities of the situation. The characterisation is brilliant. The way Eames had held back parts of his past from Arthur is very realistic. The intimacy here is what struck me most. Eames' hand at Arthur's back, calming him. The tension and worry in the park where they didn't care who was watching.

You know, I'd love to read some of Eames' point of view. When he was keeping a brave front for Arthur; or their last night together; or even now, in prison, thinking of Arthur going on that job with Dom, living his life. I guess I'd love to read more of anything in this 'verse. :3

Bookmarking this story. :)

chase65 January 31 2012, 07:27:15 UTC

Uh oh, I didn't mean to create a 'verse. Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to tell me what you liked. I spent a little more time with the before than the prompter might have wanted for a prison fic, but it's gratifying that the it reads realistic.

As for Eames' point of view. I have given it some thought. I'm thinking maybe the aftermath of his meeting with his attorney and him seeing what's actually on the cctv footage. And perhaps a little bit of his first week in lockup. It's worked out a little in my head, but not committed to print yet.

I'm pretty flattered to be bookmarked :-).

rascalthemutant January 27 2012, 08:54:37 UTC

Oh this was heart-breaking. :'(

chase65 January 31 2012, 07:28:35 UTC

Thank you ;-). I appreciate your commenting.

sneaqui February 3 2012, 07:48:45 UTC

You either know your stuff or you did a lot of research, because you did an incredible job with the details.

And the last couple scenes just KILLED ME. Really sad and beautiful.

And I really like your dialogue and the way you wrote Arthur.

Well done!

chase65 February 13 2012, 11:01:54 UTC

No real research, except to verify the mayhem and of course two weeks jury duty. Thank you very much for reading. I'm glad you found the dialogue effecting it's my favorite thing to write. This was my first attempt at A/E so I'm happy you liked Arthur. Your comments are gratifying and I appreciate that you took the time to comment :-).