The Hustler 2/4 Brian/Dom

[chase65]

Title: The Hustler 2/4
Author: blackberry belle
Rating: PG
Pairing: Brian/Dom
Warnings: Pre-Movie, AU, language
Feedback: Always greatly appreciated
Disclaimer: Clearly these characters are not mine.
Summary: Brian rides along.

Author's Note: Thanks to everyone who left feedback for the first part. I wanted to finish the second part & post before reading

Comments

[teamane]

*big happy grin*
This is so hot, even if there was no physical sex, they are HOT together.
I could see them in this scene ^.^
Great chapter.
:D

[chase65]

Thank you. I saw it so clearly when I was putting this part together I'm glad it came across for you. And I am quite fond of the idea of them so close to each other, in a small space with almost no touch. Maybe I can work that into another part ;-).

I appreciate your reading.

[supercaptain182]

This chapter brought a nice twist! So, Brian's a cop working the hooker beat. That's totally believable. *g*

Wow, very hot and I love the banter between these two.

Great update!

[chase65]

I'm glad you liked the banter. It's verging on being an all dialogue fic. Thanks for checking it out. It's appreciated.

[alasse]

Oh, WOW. I loved this. Really, really interesting scenario of them meeting before, and you captured the chemistry between them perfectly! Really awesome, I love their push and pull :)
Can't wait for more!
Hugs,
Arlad

[chase65]

Thanks muchly. I think there is more push and pull coming. I'm glad you felt the chemistry. The characters make it easy. The third part will be up shortly.

[khaleesian]

Brian's line 'I got tired of guys palming my crotch' was where you hooked me completely.

[chase65]

Hee. Working for the man does have it's benefits, uh drawbacks. I meant drawbacks. That's so much for reading and commenting.

[mysticdreamer32]

Well done, I really enjoyed it. :D

[chase65]

I am glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully, the next part will be up this weekend.