Lovely and well written. The characters felt very true and alive. Liked your version of Lisa. Sam, everything about him was beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.
I adored this. I can't get over the brilliant idea that the Cage was a place of peace, and the fact that Sam chose to return to "hell" because his brother was there? (Dammit, I'm starting to tear up.) Beautiful. I adored this.
Why hasn't this got more comments? I thought this was brilliant. The bird imagery and metaphors and (this is unusual for me) Lisa and Ben. I thought they were brilliant in this. Bravo! :D
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