[merlin] we were gods (+ picspam) | uther/nimueh | english

[nyaza]

(sorry for not being very active, not exactly inspired lately or having enough free time in my hands!)

Fandom: Merlin
Title: we were gods
Characters: Uther/Nimueh
Rating: G
Warnings: Spoilers up to 1x13
Word Count: 693
Summary: “Once you would come for my advice and my friendship. Now you come for my life.”
Notes: Pic!fic. I made a very small pic

Comments

[phoenixgfawkes]

Oh. Tan triste, tan hermoso.

She is the one to move closer then, smiling, knowing everything he doesn’t, ignorant to everything he does. “Once upon a time, my lord, when the sky would have cried as you died.”

Pero ya no, ya nunca más llorará el cielo por Uther Pendragon (aunque sí por Nimueh, una última vez). Precioso, Cez.

[nyaza]

(ho, he encontrado dos typos, y seguro me he perdido algun otro!).

♥ me alegro tanto qeu te haya gustado, s historia es como tan angsty y trágica ._.!

[archaeologist_d]

I liked how you wrote their relationship. I really liked this sentence. “Once upon a time, my lord, when the sky would have cried as you died.” So poignant.

Good job.

[nyaza]

♥ thanks. I wish I could write more. !
Thank you very much, glad you liked it :DDD

[sara_f_black]

Lo acabaste!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me gusta mucho como ha quedado!!!!! En especial intercalado por el picspam. ;)

[nyaza]

♥ Me alegra que te haya gustado, yo sigo sine star muy convencida pero definitvamnt es mejor que la primera version hehe :DDDDDDDDDD

[someplacetobe]

I really liked how you did this, with the pictures interjected into the story that way, to illustrate it. I like how you painted the characters so poignantly in the story. I liked the end:
“So this is it.”
“This is it.”

I liked how it said so much in those two sentences without being more than those few words.

[nyaza]

&herats; actually, the pictures came first, and after a while of staring at them I was... "there's a story here" so, I wrote it ;D

♥ thanks! I'm glad that works! thank you very much!

[someplacetobe]

"there's a story here" so, I wrote it ;D
And what a lovely story it was!

♥ thanks! I'm glad that works! thank you very much!
You're very welcome!

[starry_laa]

These was beautiful, bb! I loved particularly the short/long sentence contrast. My favourite line was, “Once upon a time, my lord, when the sky would have cried as you died.”

The whole thing was powerful, poignant and heartbreaking.

[nyaza]

Oh I do abuse that somtimes because I love it a lot, so, I'm glad you liked that ;DD ♥ My favourite line too~~

♥ Thank you, dear!!