[merlin] never bitter and all delicious {uther/morgana} english

[nyaza]

Fandom: Merlin
Title: never bitter and all delicious
Characters: Morgana, Uther [Merlin appearence] Uther/Morgana [hints of other]
Rating: PG15 | suggested dub-con though it doesn't need to be read like that, because it wasn't actually thought like that lol
Warnings: minor!SPOILERS FOR 2x03.
Word Count: 799
Summary: If she was to be discovered,

Comments

[phoenixgfawkes]

Ohhh, te quedó precioso y escalofriante, precisamente por lo sutil que es. Sólo dos pequeñas cosas: cuando pusiste touch; perhaps she is a bit too away to even care he is dare. me parece que quisiste poner he is there. Lo mismo cuando pusiste her, she doesn’t speak, she doesn’t here me parece que era she doesn't hear.

Me gustaron mucho las acotaciones entre parentesís, que a veces contradicen lo que dicen las otras frases, revelando lo que no se dice claramente pero se da a entender.

[nyaza]

Grcias ♥ y que raro es pensar que te digan que escalofriante quedo tu fic y tu sonrías por ello XD

Y gracias por decirme de esas cositas, lo escribí anoche muy tarde y hoy no me daba mi cabeza enferma para revisarlo y quería postearlo y chau. XD Así que gracias, ya está editado ♥

♥ Amo contradecirme XD

PD: VIVES!!

[phoenixgfawkes]

Perdón por haber estado tan ausente! Es que el LJ me andaba espantoso, no se me cargaba nunca y me daba fiaca comentar en esas circunstancias. Ahora parece estar andando mejor, no sé qué le pasa.

Y en este caso. "escalofriante" es un halago, sin duda alguna.

[nyaza]

haha. no pasa nada, pero se te extrañaba. el lj tiene sus dias, y sus horas. le va como se le da la gana, pero yo no peudo dejarlo XDXD

lol, que ayer emepce a mostrarselo a eva y va y me dice "lindo" y yo COMO QUE LINDO?! XD

[nyaza]

snowlullaby made it (@ snowchimes-

Sir William FTW ♥

[firthgal]

Oh, this was wonderful. Loved the contradictions in it, and the way Morgana only really felt alive when Uther was in her presence, the kiss and act of wrongness that somehow felt so right to her, her resignation to her situation at the end. Loved it!

[nyaza]

♥ thank you!! I'm glad the contradictiosn worked, sometimes I'm afraid I use them too much. lol. ♥ thanks for the pretty comment :DDD

[solochan]

I wanted to melt and die there and then, you beautiful person you...it...

GUH....

Uther and Morgana <3 and I love the line: (he is looking for something she can’t quite get

GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH How can I say it any better! I love it!

[nyaza]

Oh thank you
I'm glad you liked it *happy*
♥

[aimsleydale]

This was all brilliant, but this:

It’ll be alright, Morgana, I’ll take you out, I will

made me actually have to stop reading for a minute and just sort of wibble. Not so much because I ship it, but because it's so perfectly in character it's almost heartbreaking. The same with Magic, Morgana? Magic?.

The U/M stuff was just awesome too. Perfect and wrong and disturbing and great, well done :)

[nyaza]

I was having a really bad day and hen your comment appeared on my email, and ASLAS ♥ THANK YOU ♥

<333 I'm really glad you liked it :DD