[Fic] Momentum

[charlzway]

Title: Momentum
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Japan/Greece, Turkey, Prussia, brief mentions of Egypt, France and North Italy
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: In which a chance meeting brings two people together in a strange world of exotic creatures and death-defying acts. De-anon from the kinkmeme.
Warning: Human-AU, Victorian-era circus freaks, big cats, whips

Comments

[rose_fortress]

I am so, so happy that you didn't drop this idea and wrote a lengthy fic out of it. Greece as a silk acrobat and Japan as a tiger tamer is a wonderfully unique idea and you pulled it off with finesse.

There were some grammar errors in here (sorry, I tend to notice that kind of thing), but I don't really have any complaints about the characterizations which I consider to be the most important parts of any fic. Japan giving in to his repressed passion was my favorite part in this fic. ♥

[charlzway]

♥ I'm really happy you liked this fic, considering I find it the oddest thing I've written for these two xD

Ahh yes, I did notice some of the errors LJ was being extremely difficult when I was trying to post this. I spent two hours just trying to fix the paragraphs and formatting, and after I posted, I realized the grammar mistakes >_> (That's alright! This was unbeta'd and I tend to miss stuff like that. Which were the errors you noticed, btw?)

I'm glad you think so about the characterizations, especially since there isn't many Giripan fics like this. So I kinda wondered if I could work them into the story without compromising too much on the IC-ness.

Kiku's passion is like the ocean; calm and serene on the surface, but if you venture in carefully (or rather, if he lets you in), you'll see/feel the wonder and depth of his emotions.

Thank you for commenting :')