DR WHO FIC: And Then [Drabble]

Aug 23, 2011 12:10

Title: And Then

Author: charlottetrips

Genre: PG

Warnings: Spoilers for PoW (though, really, by now you should've seen it)

Disclaimers: Not mine :(

Author's Note: Written for who_contest drabble challenge #4 LJ. Prompt "burn". And can I say, writing drabbles is fun!

Summary: You can feel worlds and universes colliding in your head, the searing heat, the ( Read more... )

fandom: doctor who, pairing: rose/nine, challenge, fanfic, fic: drabble

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jessicaqueen August 23 2011, 22:52:05 UTC
I don't usually like 2nd-person PoV, but it works well here. Nice.

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charlottetrips August 24 2011, 02:24:04 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it didn't turn you away :)

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charlottetrips August 24 2011, 02:24:35 UTC
I didn't even realize it was poetic-ish until you pointed it out! Glad you liked it!

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charlottetrips August 24 2011, 02:24:56 UTC
Wow! Thanks :)

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bloose09 August 24 2011, 03:10:52 UTC
The imagery here is very powerful:
The fire consumes you, golden light is all you can see for a moment. Pain and ecstasy all rolled into one. You want to collapse with the weight of feeling, knowledge, power yet you feel like you flying, dancing, singing all at once.

Well done.

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charlottetrips August 24 2011, 06:29:07 UTC
Thanks so much! For the feedback and also because you helped me spot a typo!! eep!

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a_phoenixdragon August 25 2011, 08:22:37 UTC
WOW. This...

WOW *is blown away*

Gorgeous, lovie...sheer perfection!

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charlottetrips August 25 2011, 09:37:21 UTC
::beams:: thankeeeee

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