thursday (old) -stubborn

[deplusenplus]

[a 14 year old Max

Comments

[aphina101]

Hey,

I really enjoyed reading this. For such a short piece it was gripping and potent and I liked the little twist at the end. I can agree with the protagonist, who the fuck doesn't like cake?!

[deplusenplus]

Thank you!
... it is true ... who the fuck doesn't like cake?
Another writer created Max's father, so it's easy to write him with dimension and drop little details -- even within 100 words.
Thank you for dropping me your note. Made my day.

[aphina101]

I'm glad that it made your day. I think good authors deserve a comment if someone enjoys their story!