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Apr 15, 2008 16:37

Title: Oops
Genre: Crystal Tokyo
Rating: PG13
Prompt: 184) Happily Ever After @ sm_challenge; 071) Broken @ fanfic100

Jared’s eyes flew up from the heavy amount of paperwork he had been dumped with that morning to see a worried and dishevelled looking King slam through the doors of his office. Their leader was always composed, always tidy; but the ( Read more... )

character: jadeite, timeline: crystal tokyo, character: rei/mars, character: mamoru/tuxedo, fandom: sailor moon, prompts: sm monthly, prompts: fanfic100

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charliechaplin2 April 17 2008, 07:47:28 UTC

He did, and he deserves what he gets ^_^. Although to be fair to him, I don't think he's normally the kind of guy that will put the blame on someone else. I think he just panicked for a second but before he was calm enough to think, she caught him, and it just splurted out.

Rei and Jade are my favourite couple too! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

sea_thoughts April 17 2008, 01:02:02 UTC

Endymion, you are busssssted! XD I feel for Jadeite, I can see Rei flying to conclusions like that and not allowing him a breath to explain. But coming home to her like that... no wonder he perked up! XD

charliechaplin2 April 17 2008, 07:49:03 UTC

Well those two love a good fight don't they? Normally I like to portray them as calmer than most people do, but every so often they have their blow ups. Thanks for reading!

sea_thoughts April 17 2008, 21:22:24 UTC

They certainly like to argue, though I do hate stories that have them permanently fighting, that's exhausting and not enjoyable at all. But with all the UST... there are bound to be occasional explosions! :)

era_chan July 1 2008, 05:52:48 UTC

FINALLY a story where there are some "implied" make-up sex featuring Jadeite and Mars. WITH the culprit being Endymion, who ends up sleeping on the couch. Hehehehe...What a great idea you have here. Keep up the goodness!!!!

charliechaplin2 July 7 2008, 09:37:47 UTC

Thanks! It's always nice to give these two a little depth to their characters, rather than having just a permanent fight about nothing/hot make out afterwards fic...wait a sec... ^_^.

Glad you enjoyed it!

lovelylytton February 16 2009, 13:22:32 UTC

*cackles*
Endymion is one big child. Blaming his shitennou...I think he might have gotten the exact terms of the whole protection arrangement wrong, because I am quite sure that while the boys are more than happy to face dragons for their king, angry senshi are something entirely different.

I really liked this!

charliechaplin2 February 16 2009, 18:49:45 UTC

Exactly! There's nothing in their contract which states they have to handle angry Senshi.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, I'd been worried that it was a little cliche (Rei and Jade are arguing)...