Birthday drabbles part 4

[charliechaplin2]

Endymion hesitated, familiar with Kunzite’s tricks. The man wasn’t stupid, more than likely he was allowing the prince a chance to come clean before he caught him. But Endymion had been planning his secret mission for weeks now, it wasn’t going to be spoiled by a pompous guardian who thought he was better than everyone else. “How many times do I

Comments

[mrcrybrilliance]

I LOVE THIS! Seriously, hun, this piece is fantastic. I love the way Kunzite knows the whole time and manages to keep Endymion from realizing that until it's too late, and the pain in his voice is just wonderful.

I wanna smack Endymion and then hug him and tell him to give it a few years and his guardians will, once again, be his best friends.

Stupid 13 year olds. ;-)

[charliechaplin2]

Oh I'm so glad, thank you ^_^.

And actually I'm kind of glad you want to do all those things to him, that's kind of what I was aiming for. He's going through that stage in life when he wants to be independent but blatantly isn't ready for it, he thinks he's misunderstood,everyone is holding him back etc. but doesn't realise they're just trying to look out for him. He'll grow out of it ^_^

[sea_thoughts]

Oh Endymion, don't you know that you can't fool him that easily?

It's a really well written argument, I can see both character's viewpoints and feel their passion.

[charliechaplin2]

Thank you!!!!!! And hey, I think I missed your birthday too! Can I write you something to make up for it?? I'm still taking requests if you're willing to give me one. ^_^

[sea_thoughts]

Uh, request?

Something with Kunzite, Endymion and Jadeite. Or something with Haruka and Usagi and Mamoru. I love those dynamics.

[charliechaplin2]

Duly noted!

[charliechaplin2]

Oh, give Endy about three or four years and maybe a girlfriend or two and he'll learn enough to realise that Kunz really is his best buddy in the world ^_^

I'm glad you enjoyed. And congrats on the job!!

[jenbunny]

Oh my goodness!! I love love love this! So very well written and well it's Endy! :P and Kunz too, makes it even better.

[charliechaplin2]

Glad you liked it!!!!! ^_^

[venusorbit1]

So the "library" means "masturbate in the shower"...right?

Or he's using the library computers to download porn...shame on you, Endy!

[charliechaplin2]

Close, 'library' means secret trip to see ancient teleporter and possibly secret trip to the moon and then after seeing Moon Princess, maybe 'masterbation in the shower'.

He's not very clever, if he'd only talked to Jadeite he'd have been able to borrow his porn mags and saved himself months of planning.