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sea_thoughts May 28 2009, 16:01:50 UTC
*sniff*

This is so sad! So true that it's the little things you miss the most. The knowledge she'll never hear his slippers again... I'm getting all choked up. So sad.

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lovelylytton May 28 2009, 16:56:39 UTC
Oh Charlie, you broke me a little with this. The loss is so tangible, it actually hurts.

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charliechaplin2 June 11 2009, 10:34:35 UTC
Well, whenever I need inspiration to write angst, you're the person I go and read! ^_^ Thank you!

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arabianred May 29 2009, 02:51:21 UTC
Wow, very poignant and touching. I liked the transitions with the shuffling, and how Rei's responses changed over time, too. And then, of course, the contrast with the silence.

... Go write some fluff, will ya? Or some smut. Or some fluffy smut.

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charliechaplin2 June 11 2009, 10:54:25 UTC
I will try and write some fluffly smut, but I think Dhoney's latest R/J piece and VO1's 'Photograph' do a much better job...

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venusorbit1 May 29 2009, 03:04:38 UTC
GODdamn. Now I am sad. Isn't it such human nature that we miss the little things about someone who's passed that we used to get annoyed by. I'm seriously holding back tears because everyone has some way to relate to this.

And I love how patient her grandfather is, and tries to be quieter and apologizes. It reminds me of my grandpa. I'm going to go call him now.

Also, this was one of the best "interpretation of a theme" fics I have seen yet. It's just completely on task and PERFECT. Way to go, Charlie. Fucking...ungh.

Now I need Britfic antidote...stat.

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galaxylily May 30 2009, 14:19:01 UTC
This was heart breaking. I like it a lot.

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charliechaplin2 June 11 2009, 10:33:41 UTC
Thank you! Did I ever tell you that your icon is hilarious?! ^_^

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