Twists of Fate - 2 - The Allies Arrive

[charlie_bz]

Title Twists of Fate - 2 -The Allies Arrive
Author:  charlie_bz
Pairing/Characters:  Bruce Wayne/Selina Kyle, Alfred Pennyworth, Jim Gordon, John Blake
Rating:  For mature readers - Later chapters will turn quite dark.
Warnings:  see above
Spoilers:  Dark Knight Rises
Disclaimer:  Dark Knight Rises does not belong to me.
Description:  With Selina Kyle by his

Comments

[klcthebookworm]

Two chapters review in one go. I don't usually do this, but right now all my thoughts are a bit jumbled

[charlie_bz]

Thank you so much for your review and expressing your reservations about some points.

I hope to explain a bit more about the secrecy of Selina and Helena in later chapters. The way I see it, BW is actually a very, very private person and he only wants the public to see what he wants them to see. I think the paranoid guy in him wouldn't want his daughter to be the subject of paparazzi nonsense. Also, even though Selina had the clean slate, I think she would prefer not to be in the limelight. But, stay tuned for more about all that in subsequent parts.

I'm glad Gordon is ringing true because I worried a bit about him. Also, you and I would have to fight to snap him up! :)

Again, thank you for taking the time to post a thoughtful review. It's greatly appreciated!

[klcthebookworm]

Bruce is completely in character; I'm just worried about a fictional character's psychological development. And possibly safety if Bruce decides to put a playground inside the penthouse. :)

[charlie_bz]

Ok, now I'm imagining a swingset and all that stuff in that gorgeous (but cold) place. :)

[wytchcroft]

second to comment. uh, superfluous much?
can i pretend i said what kicthebookworm said?
well alrighty! :))

[charlie_bz]

You can pretend anything you want - it's the Internet! :)

Will you be watching Fringe tonight? Wasn't sure what the airing schedule is across the rather large pond. I'm feeling sad about not seeing the characters on a semi-regular basis. Especially Walter.

Is that icon River reading the bible?

[wytchcroft]

Fringe finale is sadness for sho' - no, i'm not watching quite eyet though. i will miss that cast, getting a good mix on a show is so damned hard... and the Fringe team are made of Win.

ooh ooh ok i pretend i'm Willy Wonka and LJ is my chocolate factory (i always wanted an Oompa Loompa).

icon is not River - just one of my rotating 'booked' icons along with the Tam girl, Angel with a hefty tome, Giles et al.
Looks like someone i know, which is sort of an in-joke and they have the same line of glass beads in their hair.

did i mention Fringe sadness yet? waaaaaaaaaah...

ps; keep up the writing! i haven't followed a noirish mystery tec type thang in an age.