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charlie_bz

A Rainy Morning

Jul 22, 2009 19:03

Title: A Rainy Morning
Author: Charlie_bz
Description: Inara and Mal and a rainy morning
Rating: M or NC-17 but it's really not that graphic
Disclaimer: characters do not belong to me
Author's note: Thank you to Gilliebeans for helping me with certain passages!

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firefly fic, mal/inara

Comments 20

ncb1 July 23 2009, 01:15:29 UTC

I almost thought that was real....'til the thunder came.

charlie_bz July 24 2009, 01:50:12 UTC

I wanted it to be real but it just made more sense for this to be a sad little story.

browncoat_2x2 July 23 2009, 01:54:07 UTC

Very nice!!! I particularly like the 'two wet, knowing fingers' part, lovely language there! (and very very hot)

Poor Inara, having to wake up alone to the rain...

charlie_bz July 24 2009, 01:49:27 UTC

I can't take credit for that line. Blame Gilliebeans for all the sensual lovely language.

gilliebeans July 23 2009, 02:50:39 UTC

From hot to sad, oh dreams can be so mean! Going from her joyful, delighted, sexy morning to sad and lonely, watching the raindrops under cold blankets...I love it when it rains at your house, if this is the fruit! And, what about that follow-up fic we discussed?

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charlie_bz July 24 2009, 01:51:01 UTC

Thanks! Sorry about the rug. :)

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gilliebeans July 23 2009, 18:06:12 UTC

Really, we must rally the support of the comm in favor of this follow up.

charlie_bz July 24 2009, 01:52:29 UTC

That Gilliebeans is always spreading nasty nasty rumors. Don't believe a thing she says!

But...keep a look out - she's making me make this one have a happy ending.