Comments | charleswhatnow: fic post: navigate this vast divide

charleswhatnow

fic post: navigate this vast divide

Jan 07, 2012 16:20

Title: navigate this vast divide
Characters: Emily Prentiss, Aaron Hotchner
Rating: pg-13
Summary: Some things emerge static from even the most harrowing trials.
Author’s Note: word count - 1,180. Spoilers: Lauren (6x18) through season 7.

( Not only her scars - the mental reminders of this hell she lived, it’s this distance between them all that’s the most unexpected struggle. )

criminal minds, fanfic

Comments 12

magisterequitum January 7 2012, 21:25:23 UTC

Ahhh!

I really love this, Deb! I love that again, they just are, and it's kind of just easy for them to fall into this. It's nice and it's a comfort for them

charleswhatnow January 7 2012, 21:31:15 UTC

eeee! Yay!! I'm so glad! That's the thing with them for me, is that anything they would choose to enter into, given how I see their interactions, would feel somewhat natural. Just based on their ability to understand each other.

bowserbabe January 7 2012, 21:27:13 UTC

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW.

charleswhatnow January 7 2012, 21:31:57 UTC

Ahhhh!! Good!! It's all for you! I hope it hit the mark of what you were wanting :)

bowserbabe January 7 2012, 21:43:55 UTC

I have no idea what I was wanting.

But apparently this was it.

I was definitely wanting angst, though.

I feel kind of silly posting a bunch of caps and exclamation marks and bold and italic and underline and etc but that's basically how I'm feeling on the inside right now. FYI.

charleswhatnow January 7 2012, 22:37:56 UTC

Ha!! Glad you wanted angst because I think that's all I am capable of writing.

And I had NO idea where this was going when I started writing it, just that I wanted Prentiss to stick her cold hand up under Hotch's shirt. PLOT!!!

i'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

winklevii January 8 2012, 00:24:09 UTC

This is really fantastic. I really love the little details that you pick up on, and how well you know these characters. Wonderful job! :)

charleswhatnow January 8 2012, 00:30:39 UTC

oohh! always feel like details are not my strong point, so that's nice to hear!

Thank you!!

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charleswhatnow January 8 2012, 04:14:29 UTC

Thank you!! Every time I try to write heavy dialogue for them it just doesn't feel right. I realize part of that stems from my inability to write dialogue and that it doesn't fit with my writing ~style, but also the way they communicate non-verbally and that shared understanding will forever be one of the things I love about them.

thecitylove January 17 2012, 04:24:20 UTC

Ahh Deb I love this fic. <3 I love the style, imagery and ...imagining the smell of Hotch's cologne. :) So great (as usual)

charleswhatnow January 17 2012, 04:52:16 UTC

eeee thank you!! I am so glad you liked it. And that the imagely was good. Because sometimes I can picture things and I don't know how to describe it.

also: seriously, I bet Hotch smells fucking amazing.