The Weekend Flash #2

Sep 08, 2012 12:26

Just to let folks know: Tigris Eden is doing a flash writing thing on Saturdays that I'm involved in. I'm going to do my posts here on LJ because it's easy to do. 100 words or less based on a sentence starter or a picture or something pitched in the group we are using on Facebook.

Here's this week's sentence: “Is there a reason you’re not going to ( Read more... )

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nyyki September 9 2012, 00:46:47 UTC
Cutting to a 100 word tale is rough. You have to reorder your thinking.
I took a stab at yours, and this is exactly 100 words. I also left the starter sentence alone, though I could have tuned it tighter.
“Is there a reason you’re not going to finish your drink?” Kellen asked me as I pushed my chair back from the dinner table.
“You ask that after spending the week with her?" I stood.
he grabbed my wrist. "Sit. NOW." he ordered, whispering., His irises changed from emerald green to deep blood red. "You’re not leaving until you hear me out."
I remained standing, eyes closed, feeling energy flowing to the edges of the room. Every glass exploded, including his. He dropped it, shocked.
He let go. “Jerk. Goodbye.” Everyone heard me, and stared at him as I left

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charlayne September 9 2012, 01:00:25 UTC
That's great! Thanks! Love it.

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