OOC: Writing Samples

Sep 21, 2010 11:13



Third-Person Sample:

Gokudera stretched, and tried to stifle a yawn as he sat up in his bed. Today would be one of the nice normal days; he'd walk Tenth to school, maybe accompanied by the baseball-idiot. Then they'd sit through a boring lecture, have lunch on the school-roof, and then head over to 10th's place to do some homework together. Yes, that'd be nice.

Eyes still half-closed he let his feet touch the floor and carry him towards the bathroom. Or tried to at least; the half-Italian cursed as he suddenly crashed into a wall.

The bathroom door is supposed to be here.. Gokudera mumbled, brushing his silver-colored hair away from his face as he took a look at his surroundings. Bright green eyes widened in surprise as he realized that he wasn't in his apartment! The room was sparsely decorated; a large bed, a nightstand, a wardrobe, a desk and a chair. No piano, or books on various topics spread about the room as usual.

Am I still dreaming? Gokudera thought in disbelief as he just stood there with a dumb-struck look on his face. What is this shit?

Putting on some decent clothes he decided find out where he was, and see if he could find the others; maybe they knew something.

First-Person Sample:

Written in G-script, just in case (Gokudera's self-invented code)

Day 1

I've locked myself in my room to figure out a way to get out of here. I've found out that I've somehow ended up in some sort of goddamn prison along with a bunch of weirdos. Maybe some of them belong here, but I don't! I need to get out of here as fast as possible; the 10th could be in terrible danger without his right-hand man there to watch out for him! Or maybe he'll choose the baseball-idiot as his new assistant... No, can't let that happen! Let's see..

Plan A: If I had my bombs or box weapons I'd maybe be able to blast a hole through the wall. They should be around here somewhere; they must have been taken from me when I was captured.

Plan B: My mobile phone has been taken too, but maybe I'll be able to send the Family a message somehow..

Plan C: Learn if some of the others are thinking about escaping, and hear what they have to say.

rp

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